| Reviews for Backup |
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  ryn chapter 1 . 7/17/2009 :D Aw, that's really cute... to character, and short and sweet. Write more! -nodnodnod- |
 SushiChica chapter 1 . 7/30/2008 Seriously excellent work. -SushiChica |
| MadeOfStars chapter 1 . 7/19/2008 Great little one-shot. It clearly conveys the depth of the MM relationship without overstepping any bounds. (Yet, anyway... I am sure we all look forward to some overstepping in the future.) Your word choice and description was excellent. I loved the part about Mary being too shaken from the first meeting to lie and how she rushes in without thinking too much, except to have a quick exit strategy. The image of her words "hanging, shimmering" conveys the emotion so well. I look forward to more from you. |
| Tennischica chapter 1 . 7/15/2008 this is the cutest story ever |
| ainsleyhayes chapter 1 . 7/11/2008 Brilliant. Perfect, emotional, stunning, epic (yes, epic)... Really, this is incredible. And, to tell you the truth, this is half what I expected to happen on the show, and 100% what I wanted to happen. So thank you, thank you, thank you for writing it. Such an excellent fic. Seriously, for such a short piece, with such little source material so far, I'm blown away. I think this is my favorite paragraph: "He shut his eyes tightly and pinched the bridge of his nose. At the rate she was going, she wouldn’t last much longer in there. She’d returned too shaken from her first encounter to make any charade believable, and suddenly he felt a rush of relief. Yes, he told himself, this was a good idea." Not only does it describe the physical tics of Marshall, but it displays so much about their relationship in such an artful, subtle way. Amazing work. Amazing. Thank you. |
| EvulWewlf chapter 1 . 7/8/2008 Ah, the lovely Marshall, always there to lend Mary a helping hand. Great fic. |
| Glykera chapter 1 . 7/8/2008 loved it, In Plain Sight is like my new favorite show, and I love the dynamic between Marshall and Mary. |
| SuNgLaSsEs-ChI'c chapter 1 . 7/7/2008 Loved it! |
| breverson chapter 1 . 7/7/2008 That was good. You captured their connection true to form. |
| Stefanie chapter 1 . 7/7/2008 Loved it. Loved it. Loved it. Please continue. Personally hate the Rafe/Mary pairing. Rafe works better with her sister. I am hoping that Marshall's fling with his ex-TA is just a fling and will not develop into something more. I could swear Mary was jealous in last night's episode... Please continue when you get the chance. |
| hazelmom chapter 1 . 7/7/2008 Beautifully written. You really read Marshall well. sheila |
