Intriguant
(Sorry don't know English's translation)

A wonderful story, Just a bit sad that it was never finished.

Please update when you can.

This is a unique approach to HP and I really wish you had been able to finish it. I love that Neville is on such good terms with Prof. Snape instead of the boy who always melts his cauldrons. I hate Harry having to attend Hogwarts where Dumbledore can get to him but hopefully he’ll have Neville and Luna to help run interference. Hopefully they won’t become friends with the red-headed walking stomach. He’s as obnoxious as Malfoy.

An enjoyable and original story that was a fun read...sad it was abandoned.
Too many author notes though...at the beginning and end ..almost as long as some of the chapters...

Thanks for posting.

Don't you ever say that girls are no good at math! My older sister is a math wiz! She works every year for H & R Block. She has customers call her at home during tax season for advice and help filing. She did all the maths in school. Algebra, Trig and Geometry. She's a wiz at them all. I really wish you'd've continued this. It was so damn good. It would've been great to read Dumbles reaction to Harry, Neville and Luna sending back rejection letter. Now the latter two he really would li9kely have cared. But Harry is meant to be a martyr to hi9s greater good. So without him all his plans go right down the drain.

pretty please, with sprinkled marshmallows and cream, will you start this again?

aren't you lucky! I've been thrown out of a library for drinking bottled water!

I am glad you were aware Mr Jones was lying. they also lie if you take your kid out of school and tell you that you will be prosecuted for his truancy. They can't act until a child has been out of school for 49 consecutive school days. They also keep your child's name on the register and draw money from the government for him and call his name on the register daily which is really really stupid because when he chats to his friends at cub scouts, they tell him this and you rat them up to the local education authority, the head gets to take early retirement, several staff are replaced and lots of cans of worms come out.

Please update. Great story so far.

I really like your story. I hope someday that you write more on it or finish it. Since it is now 2017, are still working on your screenplay and your other stories? I hope so, because you have a lot of talent.
Thanks for the fun read,
Ron Pate
Traveler301

Damn I was kind of hoping the detective inspectors name was lestrade his name is bill not william

The chapters are not bigger than the first one

I guess they never got in or Hogwarts never got out.

Did you know CNN is caught lying? The whole media scandal is going down...HARD! The MSM that is socialist is about done and it's making all the loopy liberals run around like chickens with their heads cut off as their main source is being squeezed hard.

On talk radio shows it was well known CNN lied as people who worked their including the board of directors have admitted to spinning facts for ratings but now it's blown wide open. The cover is long gone nowhere to be seen.