| Reviews for Stop Apologizing |
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OracleOfFanfiction chapter 1 . 8/14/2013 Woo Hoo... loved it! one of favorite things about this was that you lead up to the lemon rather than going straight into it so it had a bit of fluff in it as well |
bettybox chapter 1 . 10/23/2012 Thanks for the story i really loved it... and i under stand why people are not reviewing cause they might be embarrassed for reading this kind of stuff...i mean reading lemons is not easy to openly admit. Write more like this and i will happily review... also i think cornier the better |
Katie Anna chapter 1 . 7/22/2010 We loved this story. It made us all hot and bothered if you get my drift. Slash is brilliant and you write so brilliantly. In fact Anna came in her pants. It was beautiful. Thank you for this wonderful chapter that will stay with me forever. |
ronXharryXdracoXlover chapter 1 . 9/9/2009 smexy |
Chloe-LuvDaBug chapter 1 . 7/25/2009 Wow, you are a great author! Good story like all your others. I like when these hot and smutty fics have actual plots, and this one was so cute and creative. I can see these things happening between Harry and Ron too. |
Amanda-et-William chapter 1 . 7/21/2009 mhm Short and Hot..loved it :D |
wolrdsend chapter 1 . 12/25/2008 hi there, i just wanted to say that i like your story it's a good idea... lovely |
Esprit du Coeur chapter 1 . 10/10/2008 Sorry, I didn't like it, the end at least. I just can't see Ron bottoming and it is really disgusting. I love, LOVE submissive-Harry, and ONLY submissive-Harry. I HATE, absolutely HATE, dominant-Harry and submissive-Anyone else. I love slash fics, if Harry is submissive and nothing else. The way the two were acting, I thought that would be the other way around and so I read it, but I was DAMN disappointed and it just ruined the story. How can you even see Ron bottoming for HARRY? I mean, Harry's so much smaller than him physically, it's just not right! AT ALL! EWE ~I regret reading this~ |
sillychicken911 chapter 1 . 9/8/2008 AWESOME! Very smutty! In fact, it's SMUT-TATSIC! |
bollybabe chapter 1 . 8/20/2008 so just cause i'm curious ins't Hermonie like right next to them? and wouldn't she tottaly hear everything? just a question |
BugGurl240 chapter 1 . 8/5/2008 that. was. awesome! no wait: i mean AWESOME! great story! nicelemon too. |
coldsteelrail chapter 1 . 7/26/2008 i dont exactly know why, but this pairing ravishes me. and more importantly, your story was lovely. i really like it when there is sweetness and love along with arousing boy sex.:) you are a very good writer. im off to look at your profile to make sure i read all your stories! thank you! |
GetFighted chapter 1 . 7/25/2008 I really enjoyed this. I'm used to reading and writing just smut with no plot or characters to connect to. And that suits me just fine. But it's really refreshing to read these once in a while...these cute, adorable, fanfictions. I love how Harry is easy to understand. He's hurt and confused as to why Ron keeps apologizing and I want to just hug him. Really, really good job! But, just for a bit of constructive criticism, I'd love to see you write some longer sentences. It's not always an issue, but some paragraphs were very choppy because of the quick, short sentences. Just maybe try and let them flow a little more. It makes it much easier to read! But, again...good job, anyways! Added to my favorites. |
Yaoi-Freak1990 chapter 1 . 7/21/2008 OMG THIS WAS SO AMAZING! This is by far, the most heated, passionate and adorable Harry/Ron story! so cute, Ron kept apologizing for everything. it was so perfect. The intimate scenes between them were awesome! (my ears are on fire lol) i absolutely loved this. This is probably my favorite Harry/Ron fanfic now. Thanks for taking the time to write such a brilliant story. you rock! |
Nefariousandrea chapter 1 . 7/13/2008 Good story, but it was too short. Anyway, I loved the hot schmex ] |