I really liked this! The pacing was good throughout the story. Sometimes fan fictions drag out or are too short but this one was perfect!

Wow, a really well written, believable and awesome story. : )

And they know, dun dun dun... Really good

I really liked this scene of JJ letting it all out

I like the use of hannah to make JJ talk

I really loved the end of this. Well done

I haven't watched higher ground, but I am looking this so far

At least JJ has a bit of a breather now

All those thoughts running through her head...

I quite like the way that Emily reacted, quite her

Aw no poor JJ. But good for Emily going back

Good first chapter

awesme

awesome story! i've read it a couple times now, and it just keeps getting better :) i love it!

~Vampiremuggle

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Awesome story my friend. JJ is my fav. character in both CM and HG so I always love a good xover!

Gotta say though, I was waiting for some sort of scene where Garcia looked up Daisy, Scott and maybe even Peter and Sophie to see what happend to all of them so at least JJ could know even if she didn't want to "intrude" upon their lives now. I always imagined that Scott made it big at football and gives a lot of money to kids charities, Peter and Sophie are happily married and still looking after the kids at Horizon, and Daisy is...well so many possibilities but I always kinda picutre here as a councillor (maybe at Horizon, maybe not).

Great story. I think you got the characters down pretty well, especially JJ/Shelby. I also really liked the lil' scene with Morgan outside the police station!

Keep up the good work!