I gotta stop... I'm sorry but this is just too depressing. She is just too pathetic. She also doesnt act like a grown woman. Honestly she acts like a spoiled child. Im sorry but I'm done. I'll check on your other work tho and see if I can click with any of your other work.

Shes kinda a bitch tbh. She treats him like crap.

Why didnt she go out the window again?

Real fangirl shit goin on xD

XD

why she so mood swings some one get her a pill. the plots good but i dont see them treating her that way. there very open minded when shes fifth Hokage and the fact this is the kind of talk kakashi would do as a young child like ten but now even as a teen this is all the world hates me and everyone controlls me rolls eyes. but besides that i would really like to see this story with her acting her age more it could be one the best storys out there if just needs room for fixs. but besides that its cute story.

i have to say sara is really bitchy. She over-reacts all the time and she can't seem to grasp the fact that she's in a ninja village now, not in her own world. What she think is too much is in fact normal in ninjas eyes

Harsh

Wow that was close

Wow sooo emo...I love it!

kakashi is way to ooc

well that might be part of the truth but we all know she has probably wanted to be a shinobi since long before the night almost got raped. plus, she hasn't had the chance to think about becoming a shinobi for that reason since she has barely been in that world long enough to realise it could be an option.
she's a bit melodramatic isn't she?
how old is she? It seems reasonable for Tsunade to laugh if she is isn't young enough to fit in the academy
so far so good.

ay~ la lagrimita D': la lagrimita! que hermoso! me encanto! ¡que alguien le de un Oscar a esta mujer!

shet... o.o que genial! me encanta!
-se pone a gritar el nombre de kakashi o de itachi para ver si tambien va al mundo de naruto(?)-

Her overreactions are getting really annoying. It's kinda making me want to drop the story.