very well written. feel bad for light. so cant wait for the next chapter.

Shi ni gami / God of Death

Kami no shi / God's Death / Death of God

Gami/Kami - God

Shi - Death

What's the difference between 'ni' and 'no'?

[I'm just distracting myself from torture to come later in the chapter]

~ "Kira is dead,"

Do you mean that Raito lost his memories? Because you know that Raito isn't dead... No, Raito hasn't lost his memories. He has lost will to live.

~ This room was made only for L and Kira. This was where the "final showdown" was to take place.

What is this room for?

~ Jisatsu to Hanashi/ Suicide and Stories

Hanashi - Suicide / Death of/by yourself

To - And

Jisatsu - Stories

Na-Ni-No - 'Of' inverted?

Tsunami - seaquake wave

Tsu - water?

Mi - quake, shaking, wave?

~ Now he had one goal; one purpose. After that was complete, he didn't know what he would do.

What is this goal? Punish/kill these attackers?

~ Deeta To Hakken/Data and Discoveries

Deeta - Data

Hakken - Discoveries

Track down the criminals by the telephone.

I don't like title of the last chapter. Why did Ryuuzaki do that to Raito? And it's trite (at least, I have read several such fanfictions, and not all of them were in Death Note universe) and painful that human is loved only _after_ being abused, not before. Though I have to admit that caring for somebody broken would get both of them closer, I would have preferred for hurt/comfort to become friendship, not romance, if only to prevent the impression that one takes advantage of vulnerability of another, and another clings to whoever is nearby in search of reason for continue living.

Hope for world's peace,

for lack of any murders,

for stop of deadly war,

for decrease in hostility,

for the humans' equality,

for crime being rarity,

for the humans' freedom,

for force not being used,

for humans not ever abused...

Thank you for the story. I just lash out at the plot because of its sadness and cruelty, because I don't want to think it's possible in the real world, even if it is.

ooo... this is very good! i love it! kinda hard to review in .. oh well glad you upload it in fanfiction.. Do continue!

Do you think you could continue? It's been TWO years since your last update and I would love to know what happens next.

I would love to see more and I love the stories where Light Raito whatever you want to call him doesn't want to be Kira anymore.

y no update

I know I've reviewed before... and I really love this story. But, um, y'know. You're taking your damn time. Of course I am unaware of your personal life. Maybe you're just bored of this story. Either way, I'm really just DYING to get my grubby little hands on your next wonderous chapter. I really am. Don't show people genius and then play dumb. Anywho, I'm looking forward to it. You're great at this. :)

-whimpers-

UPDATE!

Raped Raito is good Raito...

So is Raped L...but lets not get into this...

PLEASE UPDATE OR I'LL DIE!

o.o

THIS IS SO AWESOME! Please, please, PLEASE continue! This story is just too interesting to ignore! Plus you're a fantastic writer! I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the incredible work. :D

Love this story .

I love fics with a raped Raito, but its difficult to find good ones that I haven't already read.

Fallen in love with all of your fics, so please update soon!

*thumbs up*

You're a fantastic writer!

This story is really great so far. I can't wait to read what will happen next. Update soon

Update son...! This was such an awesome chapter, it was definitely worth the wait!;D

Yay!

Update!

I love this story... please continue!

3

"...and in a hiden room, watching everything, there was Watari..."

XDD sorry I couldn't help it xD

and another thing I can't help is to notice there are several parts similar to others rape stories, is it on purpose or not?

hmnn... anyway, just don't wait another year to updare again, okay missy? òó'

:D :D :D :D

The last part was effing awesome! L is such a dirty boy! XD

I loved this chapter! The story is really great, and it's gonna get even better. Thank you for updating :) I'm so eager to find out what's gonna happen next!

And there's no way I'm hating you. You rock! :D