It all was for not lol poor sanji, don't give up hope haha
it was a fun fic

don't you even think about listening to that guest, because I'm fluent in English and your English was all perfect and easy to read and understand! great story! loved it!

I just wanna say this was amazing please write more!

This was so cute and funny!

This was crappy. Your English sucked and made it difficult to read, I didn't enjoy it.

It's so cute to see Sanji trying so hard :D

I know I should have said more, giving a constructed comment and all, but no word could describe this! Your story is amazingly sweet and I also have a toothache here! Thank you for sharing your story.

Awwws that's cute

#giggles

Poor Sanji...! XD

His effort made Luffy having toothache that makes him more less eat and would lose hos weight...!

And Zoro... Really...? Don't laught!
Sanji is just trying to being a good chef to our Captain, y'know...!

Next time Sanji, make it less sweeter or dangerous for the teeth, or at least, made Luffy always brush his teeth after eating something sweet...!

For now, you can make him some soft soup, right...? And warm less-sugar hot cocoa, maybe...?

Very cute :)

i loved it! Sanji is so cute and adorable! :)) hehe

Well that last paragraph had me on the floor, so I wouldn't consider it "not funny" x)

Awesome, I love it. Won't you write more, pretty please?

you nailed it. thank you.

It was really funny/Cute