I loved the story veeeeeery much and please consider another chapter please. Trust me if you write another chapter, you will be able to make a happy ending with these two. Pretty please, I recommend a new chapter.

Love it

you really should do more of this, the storyline is amazing :)

by far my fave takumi fic so far 3

i love it! ur a great author!*

I really liked this story, you should consider making more two-shots or a chapter story made up of oneshots! hee hee, loved this story a lot, and not much to complain about-

except the fact that Takuya is a complete idiot for not just chasing after Izumi when she left- Relize your feelings d.a.m.n. it! lolz

That was really entertaining on a funny note and romantic note despite the fact I don't like Jo Bros.

I loved this. I actually like the ending...kinda like a movie or tv show where they have to finish it in the next one. :D You did a great job writing this. :D its great. I hope there is more!

What an exciting birthday!

Great chap! Plz tell me youre making another chap because its frikin awesome! okay thts all I gotta say.

this was really good...love the Takumi moments, but it is very sad that they didn't get together in the end...oh well, i hope you make a sequel or something _

Great story so far, wonder how its going to end

Good start, update soon