I don't understand why this story has so few reviews, it is so much fun!

This story was a fav. of an author I just finished. And YES I will be reading the next chapter. Liking it so far.

enjoyable read. tense visit to bookstore. tender honeymoon scene. Thanks for sharing. aw

Bella is becoming an overreactive, controling bi*ch. She doesn't need to know every freakin detail about Edward's life. Jesus Christ.

~ B

FINALLY! I get really annoyed with people who say that Edward's dangerous because he wants her blood & that jacob is safer. HELLO! Remeber what happened to Emily? Yeah and jacob didn't even imprint on Bella. he also has a bit of a temper.

On the downside, how could Bella think of Edward like that? She knows better. Well at least I thought she did. That kinda of vetos the talk she heard between Edward & jacob in the tent.

~ B

Ew. There's too much jacob. Not enough Edward. I think Bella has thought more about jacob than Edward throughout these irst 4 chapter. And this is supposed to be an Edward/Bella fic.

~ B

I found it while looking through all the rated M, Edward/Bella, completed stories.

And yes, I will read the next chapter. Thanks for asking. Haha :)))

~ B

I really enjoyed this story. Well written, good characters, storyline just exciting enough.

I do not believe I would have enjoyed your other story. There is too much magic in the love Bella and Edward share. Having her remain human would have destroyed the magic. And magic is very necessary to everyone's love.

Perfect.

Very well done. Very, very tastefully done. Beautiful is another word that fits well. Exquisite is another.

Romantic and sweet. Everything a wedding night should be.

That was an absolutely beautiful chapter. I love the way Tanya was, very subtlely, put in her place. The vows were perfect.

Guess they both had a few things to talk about. I understand why Bella feels like she does having been raised by Renee. I couldn't understand why she didn't see how much this meant to Edward and at least try to be happy about it for him. She's usually all about trying to make everyone else be happy. She's marrying Edward because it will make him happy, but she isn't really doing it willingly. And I agree with Edward that Alice needs to chill out with the surprise factor.

Can't exactly blame Bella for what she's feeling. Edward is just a tad overprotective. Not telling her Tanya was coming wasn't very nice. And I do understand why he sent the invitation to Jacob. Alice does gets more than carried away when she goes shopping and running errands. Edward isn't going to be real happy with the conversations he and Bella are going to have. She also does jump to conclusions from lack of information. The lack of information can usually be traced to Edward or Jacob.

That bookstore would have been heaven. Bookstores are the only places I will willingly shop. The encounter with Sam was a little tense. Bella will never understand that you cannot be responsible for anyone else's happiness. Life decisions you make do at times cause pain for friends and family. That is not something you can avoid. You don't do it on purpose. Life just happens.