Well this was unexpected damn I hate Sasgay SakuIno and NejiLee died damn that sux other then that It was a cool one shot the lemon was nice the ending was cool as was the battle

great story, congratulations

I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR THIS FUCKING SONG FOR SO LONG, THANK YOU SO MUCH! I love this song.

Really thought out：）

This was without a doubt, the best one-shot I ever read. Simply perfect.

That was the best one-shot I have ever read.

Excellent.

my friend is gonna die when she reads this lol like i said her and the sex stories

That was quite the story very powerful and well told. I noticed the reference to the "Bad Boy" song clever idea Again good work hope to see some other good ones soon.

I liked the story and the plot was good but I by reading this story I know you read Pearl Cove by Elizabeth Lowell. Which means you not only write your stories well you also have good reading taste.

VARY GOOD

Very well written story. like how you avoided any explicit terms for the sex (read: love making) scene. Also stealing that bad boy, man, lover, friend line from that song was sneaky XD. This is one of my favorite couples but it sadly isn't as popular as other pairings. Anyways keep up the good work and if you need a beta reader just check me out! ;D

great. just perfect. thats all i can say.

great story i dont think there is anything else to say )

Could have sworn Shizune said no victory celebration activities, but I suppose she did leave the room for a reason, eh?