damnit it's making me cry

this is beautiful

Loved the chapter.

Hey
This story is great and I would like to make it available for people who don't understand english. So if you let me I would like to translate it into german.

Truly a fabulous journey.

One of the most beautiful, gorgeous, and lovely story ever.

Now that's gorgeouly beautiful

I'm glad that Hermione is so understanding in this story. She is one of my favorite characters.

Your grammar does need work, but (to me, at least) that is the hardest part of learning a new language. I took the liberty of editing a small portion of this chapter. I'd be happy to explain the changes I made and help you more with the grammar. I know my grammar is perfect, but it is pretty good (especially for a native speaker [who always seem to have the worst grammar of their language]).

"I'll show you around, usually by now, Slytherins know their way around the system in the house. Just keep to yourself for now."

"All right," Caledonia replied.

As dinner ended, Tracey showed Caledonia the way to the Slytherin common room, gave her the password to the common room, and explained the rules of Slytherin. She found it was different than Gryffindor. In Slytherin, it was pretty much everyone for themselves; it was you fight for yourself or die trying. Tracey pointed out everyone's names, who they are, and what and who to watch out.

Tracey spent the whole afternoon filling Caledonia in about Slytherin, and what she knew was going on for the past few years at Hogwarts. Caledonia found it fascinating to listen to a different perspective about herself as Harry Potter. A few other Slytherins had contributed their thoughts. It was clear that they shared a similar line of thinking as their Head of House and Draco Malfoy, that Harry Potter was an attention-seeking prat and it left her feeling exasperated. Bedtime rolled around, and Caledonia learned she was going to share a room with four other Slytherin girls: Tracey, Pansy Parkinson, Millicent Bulstrode, and Daphne Greengrass. Much to her chagrin, the three girls were the students that she disliked most after Malfoy and his brutes, Goyle and Crabbe.

"You better stay away from my guy," Pansy announced as she stepped into the room, giving Caledonia a pointed glare. "I don't care if you're Professor Snape's ward, but if you touch Malfoy, I will take you down hard."

Caledonia rolled her eyes and placed her hands on her hips. "Don't worry. He's not my type. You can have him all to yourself."

Absolutely wonderful. Very well done!

I love the story. It is good.

Damn it! Now I gotta wait for it to be edited? Rrr! Really tempted tto just keep reading.

A Daniel Radcliffe cameo? Hell yeah!

God it's so mushy. But also real. But also really mushy! I love it!

Okay so when I saw that this was going to be Draco/Harry, I was hesitant to read it. VERY hesitant. Not gonna lie I am very much not a fan of that ship. But I saw there were many, MANY chapters and you edited this entire thing. That means a hell of a lot of work, thought, time and effort was put into it. So I decided to give it a go. And I gotta say I don't regret that decision at all. It's a bit silly at times and the spelling and grammar could use a good bit of work (Ha! Like I can talk!) but the development feels natural, the pairing genuine, and the story overall well thought out. I really do like this so far and am excited to read more and see how it progresses.