It started off like a quick horny teen fic, I love you baby, let's go out, ok, you're hot.
Then it became a Neji domineering fic and poor Ino was used and abused and not allowed to climax.
And then it was all, you're my queen, slamming into each other, snuggle snuggle.
So... To sum it up, it was good but there's room for improvement

This was totally amazing and so hot

Aww

This is sick. I'm guessing your a fan of fifty shades of grey? Disgusting

When women say no, it really means NO. Shame on you for sharing that kind of stories, where women are abused. I hope that young people don't read your stories, it could lead them to misunderstanding what sex is in a relationship...

LOve it!

AWESOME!

THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL. I LOVED IT. *_*

i loved it i hope you write a sequal xD

.HOT!

I could see neji being like this. Hes been made most of his life to be submissive to the clan so i guess its only natural he would feel the need to dominate and show his masculine side with a woman. Very well written. Loved it!

hot story i love it

i like it alot, . and not just cause the lemon . but that did help lol, could you ,make a squeal please! like neji jealous when ino is talking to an ex (shikamaru) . i would wuv you forever if you do

Wow. This was excellent. Spectacular. Wonderful. It was different from the usual lemons. It was rough and sexy, and completely enjoyable. You are a wonderful writer. I hope to read more from you.

Oops, when I said:

"Anyway, I love how Baer you make an aggressive and dominant guy sound, so please wrote more."

I really meant:

" Anyway, I love how hot you make an aggressive and dominant guy sound, so please wrote more."

I have no idea why I wrote "Baer" instead of hot. I don't think Baer is even a word...