| Reviews for Will of Fire, Heart of Stone |
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samics chapter 7 . 5/30 Mostly a well written story! There are some faults though. You kept repeating things again and again and it just felt like you were trying to increase word count. There were also some inconsistencies like the Hokage knowing there was an Uchiha among the contenders at the start of the tournament but then being surprised about there being an Uchiha towards the end of it. |
arinst2305 chapter 7 . 5/27 Next? |
Guest chapter 7 . 5/18 This most certainly deserves a sequel. Also is Temari still an 'honored' guest? She would be an interesting love intrest for windmaster Naruto and at the same time pacify relations with Suna provided they come together willingly(which might be possible with how Naruto treated her during the exams and possible off screen interaction) |
Paul Lenzen chapter 7 . 4/27 Okay this is really good and I'm hoping that there is a sequel or if not that you someday write one |
Guest chapter 7 . 4/17 That was pretty depressing, why would you even write that ? The whole Kumo's arc was nothing but disgusting |
lord 7th chapter 6 . 4/15 Hy |
Animelovermusic chapter 7 . 4/5 Wowww A bit sad about the ending though, but really really good. Thank you for your hard work ️ |
Schlepian chapter 7 . 3/3 Wow One of my top 3 favorite Naruto fanfics I've ever read. Really loved your portrayal of the 3rd hokage. I know the story has a really nice ending here, that doesn't stop me from being disappointed there isn't more 3 |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27 Wow |
BaddieDZ2 chapter 7 . 2/20 Well... this was not a good story. |
Hytekrednek chapter 7 . 1/15 I have to say that you have become one of my favorite writers, I hope that you will be here for years to come. |
changeisneeded chapter 7 . 12/5/2019 This is without a doubt the greatest Naruto story I have ever read. wow. |
daily-chan chapter 7 . 11/13/2019 Wait, where is the rest of it? Is there a second story where it continues? How will Naruto deal with Mandara and Akatsuki? What happens on their three year trip this time around. And what of Gaara and the other Jinchuuriki in Konohas custody? How will Naruto deal with the fallout of the old mans actions? Love what youve done so far, wiser and strong wind user Naruti, different teams and no Sasuke, love it. |
makubex000 chapter 7 . 11/11/2019 Overall, the story is great though it leads on a harsh ground of Sarutobi. Many bloods have been spilled unexpectedly bcoz of the third iron rules. Im really sad about what happened to Hinata and her whole clan also the uchiha though the reference about the uchiha massacre still exist here. how about the two jinchuuriki that sarutobi managed to captured? And Naruto being the youngest Hokage? that would be a good sequel if this story will continue. still needs a lot of research! thanks. |
Navyson2001 chapter 7 . 9/26/2019 Dammit I need more of this |