That was horrible. Completely and utterly horrible. Ndim really sorry to say this but the whole idea of it it disgustied me. But the writing was really goood if it was a nicer story it would have been so much more better :)

Woah. This was cool. I think it's a nice portrayal of the whole child grooming thing, and I loved seeing stuff from Scam's point of view. It was well written, and flowed nicely. :)

I absolutely love this! How you get to see Sam develop as a character, how you see Scam's affection and especially the end, where Sam says that she sees nothing wrong with it because that's what Scam taught her. *dreamy sigh*

sorry, got lazy about logging in :p

ok ok this was really good! duh :p lol

i had the same idea of a fic where Scam would teach her of his evil ways (evil laugh) but you were so very good with the details and i love how really, its one main lesson he keeps her focused on 'sinners must die!'

poor gabby :(
it makes sense tho i mean its like she was raising sam at all :p

lol omg 'this man did the badest thing ever...he didnt listen to me!' lol i laughed :p

once again you've took me away with your awesome-ness, lol i loved so many of your stories, i decided oh screw the 'add fav story' button, for you fav authors button is soo in!

hasta pronto!

~little big wonders

omgg awesome story.. u ended it right when it got good :(

please write more stories like this.. i love how they are both evil yay lol..

and Scam is ughhh sooo hotttt.. please please please write more!

WOW, Scam is manipulating.!

this story makes me beyond scared. i have trust issues xP

and something like this happened to my friend. :/

this is scary, but in your case, completely awesome.!

Aw! Yes, I'm just as twisted as they are...

Oh... my ... God.

That was brilliant, really well written.

It scared me...I don't trust babysitters anymore...

The ending was just, well, wow, really. I especially loved that line "It's not a sin to kill those who need to be punished."

Great story, and it really got me thinking on how easily a person cn twist an innocent mind like that.

shivers... i loved it.

hi wow that was the most intresting story i think i have ever read and the title totally matches the whole story plot i just love the way you made Sam beleive everything that Tim said because on the show she seems to hate his guts lol but anyway wow really this is awsome. XD *_* _

It's really amazing.

I liked how you "described" each step towards the "dark side", especially since they seemed to have a good reason doing this (not that I support violence).

Yet, I liked it.

Congratulations.

Cloudsdreams

Yeah! It's up!

OMG! That was AWESOME! XD

Scam is so evil, but like I said, who can't resist the devilishly charming, cynical man? Not even Sam. :D

["It's not a sin to kill those who need to be punished, mommy."] Loved that line! Really spoke out.

Even though their killing isn't really justified, I have to say they at least have reason to kill. It's kinda like X from VF just...reversed? XD

[smiling when she saw his black Vanquish]:D I LOVE fast cars! XD

'Trigger-Happy'! :D Great name! LoL

*sigh* This was so good.

I wished it hadn't ended. :(

But it was awesome! XD

Ciao,

Xaleria

P.S. Have a great 4th of July!

Wow this was really how would i saw this... Fricking AWESOME!

I just love how sam is this killing machine, especially how tim made her that way

This is like the best one chap story ever.

Red

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGWOWOMGOMG!

I luv'd this.

OMG

I loved this line

"She's the perfect picture of innocence, yet she is built with deceit and lies.

He smirked.

Just like me."

It's so evil just like Tim Scam!

Oh and my fav of all time:

She gasped. "He didn't listen? To you? Why wouldn't he listen to you? HOW couldn't he listen to you?"

Tim shrugged. "Isn't it horrible?"

It's so awesome the way he's brainwashed her with hi words.

What an awesome corruption and she trusts him so much.

I loved' this!

You can tell!

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Evil, Manipulative, Brainwashing Tim Scam innocent Samantha AWESOME FIC like urs!

lol

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Luv you lots,

Cresenta's Lark