Incrível sua história muinto emocionante estou curiosa para saber mais continue com este belíssimo trabalho

Estou amando sua história magnífica estou curiosa queria ler mais deste seu belo trabalho

Kudos!

love it, please update

It was lovely seeing the kids get a day off (and learning their full names!) But this sounds suspicious...

Hope we get to find out more soon!

This is a fascinating chapter, and once again I'm left with the slightly uncomfortable feeling that there is something glaringly obvious going on that I'm just not seeing, despite rereading the story from the beginning once again. I guess it's that the monastery, and the people who inhabit it for that matter, just feel so wrong somehow, but I'm too dense to see why exactly. :o

I'm really intrigued by the varying reactions that each of our heroes seem to have this rather odd situation. While Hank and Sheila's feelings for each other have always been kind of obvious, the way that they seem to be so relaxed about the matter here feels, well, odd for some reason. The fact that Diana seems to be equally at ease as the Ranger and Thief, although with less obvious reason, also seems a little strange. Clearly Presto and Bobby both feel rather out of sorts (albeit to different degrees and for different reasons), but it seems that, out of all the great and the good gathered in the hall, it's Eric who's the most immune to the monastery's strange influence, and I'd really love to know why. ;)

As for the prophecy, well I'm dying to learn more. Oh, and I'm also pretty curious about this 'greatest man who ever lived' too, if only because he sounds kind of important, lol. :D

Review aside, it's really great to see you writing again (even if I am rather late in stopping by to say so), and so another update would be most welcome (just as soon as you're ready of course!). _

Bluetiger. )

Ahhhhhh! What about this prophecy! I'm glad to see you back and updating. This was a wonderful chapter, but we want more please.

A side note, will you also be updating Madness of Kings? I love that also and have been wondering what happened to that girl Ed saw.

First update in awhile! I'm glad because I am a big fan of your stories and I wanted to see where this story was going.

PLEASE keep writing, and hopefully the next chapter will come sooner. ;D

Thank you for writing again! Can't wait to see where this storyline goes...

Great story.

I hope Sealgirl,will give your original characters ther own story,away from the canon characters.

This is one Great story.

I hope Sealgirl you can do a story focus on other young ones,I like to known more about them.

Great story update soon.

I love the Eric/Gail hook-up.

I hope after this story,Sealgirl you will do the Adventures of the other Young ones,I like to known more on ther Backstory.

Maybe you can tell what ther weapons do?

This is Great.

Maybe after this story,Sealgirl you can do stories on the Other Young ones,I want to known more on ther backstory and the powers of ther weapons.

Hope you update soon.

The monastery is a really strange place, kind of creepy. And Eric gets to see Gail again, sweet!

Eric's wake up call was interesting, I guess that the others probably all had similar starts to their day too. From it's description, I found the summoning bell to be quite creepy, the way it seemed to chime in answer to Eric's unspoken thoughts, and the way the sound lingered longer than it should've, all sound pretty disturbing. Yet Eric doesn't seem to give the bell too much consideration, too distracted by the possiblity of breakfast perhaps. :D

I loved the way that Eric reacts to the applause he receives upon arriving at the hall, I guess that sort of thing doesn't happen to him too often now does it, lol. Oh, and I'm glad that Eric bumped into Shiran, if only because I'd failed to notice his brief cameo in your earlier story. D

I'm glad that Dungeon Master's other pupils are also at the Monastery, and I'm really looking forward to Eric's reunion with the Harlequin. Still, he has to meet up with his own friends first, and find out just why Bobby isn't keeping an eye on Uni like he was instructed to in the previous chapter. O_O

This seems to be a very original storyline, and I certainly can't see where it's heading. Still, I get the feeling that I've missed one or two significant clues along the way, perhaps I need to go back and read it through a few more times. :)

Update soon! )