Wow that's deep...I love it!

Wow! That was an amazing insight into Ryou's true feelings towards his Yami.

Wonderful poem! I loved it!

~Melody

Wonderful. Very heartfelt. Ver in character as well. Superb job!

It was a little depressing, but very well written. I think you really pulled off the way Ryou views their relationship very nicely... And I really did think it was deep how Ryou just wanted Bakura to care and protect him. And how he says, "My Friend. My Brother. My Yami." makes me really feel for Ryou, because I could just sense how much it hurts to know that Bakura isn't anything what Ryou wants him to be. Anyway, nice work! :)

AW BGA! *sniffles* that was so... HEARTFELT! It was just, so sad, but good. How could Bakura ever say NO to that? Its so gorgeous! *sobsob*... that was so deep. I could actually Imagine Ryou-Kun saying it in my head as i read it! IVE MISSED YOU GUYS!

~Rose xoxox

Utterly awful? Oh, far from it! You mustn't degrade your work like that! This is a wonderful. Yet another amazingly well-written and insightful piece from your pen (or keyboard as it would be).

sad! poor ryou-kun. awe. he makes me happy but sad. i want a ryou plushie. so i can huggle it. yea. .

All I can say is BRAVO! This poem is so powerful and I could almost imagine Ryou saying this to his Yami...

I was thinking about not reviewing for once, but decided against it seeing that I have such a nice record for reviewing everything you write ;)

Beautiful. That's all I can say. Beautiful. Describes Ryou well (or atleast that's how I would feel in his place). Now you should write a poem as an answer from Bakura :) I like it how you can repeat that one part "My Friend. My Brother. My Yami." without sounding repeatitive, excellent work!

See you again soon, I hope!

I really liked that; I could actually imagine ryou saying this to his Yami. Well done!

What do you mean awful? I was great! A different twist to the poem I wrote. It was so spiteful, hating, and yet...beautiful. You pulled of this side of Ryou's opinion very nicely. The ending was similar to my own, but in my opinion your's is much better. It was very simple, but left a big impact on me. You're very talented to do that!