Well, aw. That was just so adorably cute! I love Oliver in this. I loved this(:

He's falling in love with herrrrrrrrrrr.

I'm so glad that you've already written this all up because I would HATE to have to wait for each chapter!

Oliver is mad! Poor guy. I liked this(:

... NO! Oliver! Hey, Lilly cares3 How cute(: I'm rushing to finish this review so I can read the next chapter. Oh my gosh, this was a good chapter, though!

I can't get over how mean they are to each other. Oh well.

Oh, geez. She's really mean in this! I like the storyline, though. What I know of it right now anyway.

Wow! That seriously was the best Loliver story I've because of the way you wrote it! I've read a lot that just dribble on without a clear path or ending. You clearly put a lot of thought into this plotline and it worked! I like how you characterized them, even though it wasn't completely accurate it worked beautifully! Wonderful job! I spent hours today reading this in one sitting, I just couldn't put it down! I noticed that you wrote this years ago but I really hope you keep writing because you have the gift! Lovely job!

Best Loliver story ever! I loved it so much emotion and drama! Please make a sequel because i couldnt stop reading! Please continue to write in the future because you are really good:)

i do have one question: why did oliver kiss katie in the first place? it seems a little random. and then when asked he said "you wouldn't believe me if I told you." was it because she did something that reminded him of lily or was it some way he snapped after being forced together with her by the girl he loves that he just said 'screw it'? or was it a sick plan of jealousy and breaking denial? i really don't know.

pwease? you don't have to update this Q&A, you can just pm me!

awesome story, is ur sequal out?

The first time I read your story, it makes me cry.

This story is one of my favorite Loliver story so thank you.

You are an awesome reader! D

I love this story!

This was an really good story- one of the best i've read! I liked the plot because you kept it interesting. Please continue the sequel. :)

wow your story is simply amazing! i totally abandon doing all my planned schedule for your story! i was close to tears at the sad moments too! i haven't read such a good piece in ages. keep up the good work (:

i literally just stayed up all night reading this and im in love with it. its so not a typical gushy loliver story. the drama wasnt too much or too little. it was perfect. and the emotions felt so real. its kinda insane! ) i could go on and on about this story but all in all it was incredible. youre an awesome writer.

now off to read the sequel! )