*cries forever* So heartbreaking! I just love things that make me cry, and cry, and sniffle, and sob. I really enjoy them so this fanfic was right for me! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS! I hope you all understand my weird love for things that make me cry.

That was really nice! I would only make one suggestion: use different fonts for the different voices: maybe italics for Hermione, bold for Draco, a third typeface for the parts of the story in 'real life'. Other than that, a lovely idea. :D

Talk about sad... but I really like it. It was very beautiful and the last paragraph was heart-wrenching. Thanks for such a good read!

Melissa

wow, that is very nouvelle vague-ish

I just wanted to say that that was the sweetest short story ending I have ever read! As I was getting to the end, I was feeling kind of put out and felt I may have wasted my time, but then those last few sentences were the absolutely sweetest things I have read in a long time! Thanks!

really sweet

Aw, that is so sweet, do you think that you could do another one were they do meet in the other world? Please?: ) x

~Haraldzidla

T_T.

Drip, drip, drip.

Aww, it's soo *SOB* sad.

...Whoo. I'm recovered now. It was perfectly sweet and very very nicely written.

Though in another world Draco would be MY lover... But this version is still lovely.

Ellae