LOVED THIS!

I can see why you lost your muse for this story. It was a bit darker than usual though it was neat seeing Baron as the price. But that kinda left my stomach a queezy. But it was good! Baron is the perfect gentleman and Haru was so strong which sold it for me. I loved the flight part!

i love your story . 3

An excellent chapter, and Haru and baron going on strike! Oh,ho, funny. Later with the duel and Haru worried but trusting Baron anyway aww.
Loved this fic!

'Had actually persuaded into making' funny. The cat court would want her to wear more frilly dresses then partial ones.
That an the jail cells, that was unexpected.
'Did my father do anything else to earn your undying hatred? Such a good line.
'Nothing to keep up your spirts like a co-conspirator' May I use that? It's really quite quoteable.
Oh Haru's reaction to every book written is cat is, I feel you Haru. I really really do.

Baron's Mom was British nobility, nice
"Your very hot accent" ooh my goodness yes.

Baron's chat with Natori, you can tell he's ticked. Then with the cat king thinking it would be just fine, gosh he doesn't know Humbert at all.
"Heir to a kingdom of morons and imbeciles." Great line.
Then when Baron slowly starts to realize that Haru's in the room. "Which does not usually issue from beds" Oh that funny.
'Trying as hard as possible not to make the girl even more nervous of him' you really feel for Baron there.
Then at the ends where Baron is trying to find a compromise, can really tell he's trying to fix the mess as best he can.

"You'd think they weren't married from the way she's acting" Well she's not.
"Since she wasn't ready to commit suicide and it seemed a little silly to kill the cat she'd saved she'd settled for trying to escape again." I busted out laughing at that. Haru your a little spitfire.
Plus having the completely plausible reason for Baron going to the human world for hearing about the fish crackers that his mother had loved.
Then baron's reaction to finidng out the news!

It's fine, it's still a good story :) I already have a good feeling about them.

awesome story

Heehee. I enjoyed how the duel ended.

even when I knew Baron was going to win. I had a little fear of how Haru would react when he took the challenge since she didn't know he was going to win.

This was short sweet and to the point! A lovely little point!

I love this fic

? does haru look like a full cat with a few human traits or more like what she did in the movie? only a lttle more cat?