Oh my God! It was absolutely stunning. I just loved everything about it and... words can't begin to describe what I feel towards this little one-shot because it was just SO AWESOME. I loved it and you wrote it wonderfully. Congratulations ;)

I would have liked to see that as a Pokemon episode or special.

Wonderfull! :)

ohmyfreakinggosh that was so sweet please write more. :)

Please, PLEASE do NOT confuse the two characters 'your' and 'you're' (at the part where they exchanged names). Your story is pretty unique mainly because of the cross-dressing, and your use of words is fantastic, and I preferred if you would give a little more feeling on the part where Ash was starting to dance, because it felt a little too straightforward and fast.

That was just my critique.

As a fangirl of this pairing, I must say...

OMG SO MUCH FLUFF! SO MUCH I CAN'T STAND IT I LOVE YOU FOREVER! XDXDXD

Oh mai god. This was freaking amazing. I was pleasantly surprised. I wasn't sure what I was expecting, exactly. But this was excellent. Wonderful job. :D

Well. Thanks for proving me wrong.

I was so sure this was going to be a load of bullocks.

Maybe it moved a little fast, but considering that it was a one-shot, it was beautifully written. Admittedly, I read it with only mild interest; the end is what struck me. As in, the last few lines. That was a beautiful ending. I especially enjoyed how it touched on realism, what with Gary requesting they be friends first.

Very well written, grammar was great, story was interesting, ending was grand. All in all, great job. I haven't read your other stories, but I agree that this one was definitely one of the best I've read in a long while-and not just in the pokemon category.

that was fun :) nice work

This is so beautiful! I almost didnt read it, but Im so glad I did! you're really a great writer, I hope you do more soon :)

I'm...absolutly awe struck. even the words I'm typing now are hard to push out...it is definetly one of the most imaginitive and best stories I've ever read...and that's somthing comming from me.

"Effing mind-blowing" this phrase does you no justice. My heart skipped a beat at those lines: "If you weren't a boy, I wouldn't have given you a second thought."

I don't think I can say much more, except:

WOW~ :D **still speechless**

Review for "Dance into the Night"

Thursday, 10 July 2008

Greetings, this is Glenn M., an avid fanfiction reader. I log on to this site at least once a week for the latest Pokémon fanfiction. Yup, mainly Pokémon fanfiction, although I also read fanfiction from other fandoms.

As for my review, this shounen-ai fanfic that focuses on PalletShipping is truly one of a kind! I've never imagined that any Pokémon fanfic author would turn Ash into a popular figure in Pallet Town with two personas: the delivery boy, and the dancing gypsy girl. A small problem on my part, however: I find it hard to imagine Ash in a dress, while he's got short hair; a matching hat can mask that visual flaw, though. After all, Ash has dressed up as a girl quite a few times in the animé, and to be frank, Ash can look darn pretty in a girl's outfit! I have a knack for appreciating beauty around me.

That's all for this review! If you feel like replying to this review, feel free to do so via e-mail. More power, and keep up the good work!

Wow...I think I have to say that's your best story yet! You are definitely growing as a writer. I absolutely loved your language usage. It all worked beautifully. Congratulations! Quite a gem indeed!

Yay! A lovely new fic, and absolutely wonderful! I can tell you really put yourself into it, it was just fantastic! It's on my favorites and...and I'm so amazed I'm smiling and I don't even know what to say!

That was perfect, I love the part:

"If you knew what I was, you wouldn't...wouldn't have even looked my way..."

"If you weren't a boy...I wouldn't have even given you a second thought."

It was just so perfect, I love it! You could write an entire fic of this, Ash as a secret crossdresser, Gary knowing what he is and trying to bring him out, the town finds out, dramatic climax, they escape into the night together. -sighs dreamily- That'd be awesome.

But, truly, that's just a fantastic story! I love it!

I'm impressed! You made Ash crossdressing sound so natural, I didn't even give it a second thought. And that ending, marvelous!