This series was too fucking good to be true. By the end I started hoping for Harry/ Amanda, but oh well. Superb books, stayed up till 2-3 o'clock in the morning to finish these. Third time reading and they still haven't lost their charm. I've gone ahead and bought the entirety of the Dresden files because of your excellent writing . And a while back I was naming stuff variants or Amaris, brilliant intrigue, suspense, character and plot development. I thoroughly enjoyed your writing, to bad you are no longer in the business of writing on Fanfiction. Amazed regards,
Zachary

I love this story!
Fun fact, this is the only series ever that I have re-read. And I have read a lot of fanfictions.

Oh god! Can't breathe! Laughing too hard!

My review for the last chapter was a bit emotional over what I perceived as Amaris' demise. But I still don't like how you handled the Amaris subplot.

Harry and Amanda were supposed to get married and raise Amaris as their own, you fucking horrible excuse for an author!

When I read scenes of Harry and Amanda interacting, my mind is screaming: "Just fuck already!"

Does Amanda even exist if Harry isn't there? You know, part of the guide for making a strong female character is to not only write about them when they're thinking about or interacting with a male character - it also makes them much less annoying. I've been hoping that Amanda dies ever since she was introduced. Does she even have any character traits apart from loving Harry and wanting to train? What are her grades like? Does she spend time with her family? Does she enjoy vacations? What do she and her friends talk about? Who knows

Utterly brilliant! You write HP fanfic like a Glen Cook Black Company novel, capturing the dark side of Harry while he's fighting for the light which makes him a perfect Dresden type. Just amazing. The mix is pure genius and I hope you have links posted in your bio to any original work you're selling.

"Your friend is a complete nut job."

I couldn't stop laughing after I pictured a young girl staring up at her father with wide eyes saying that!

Gonna be honest here, this may be my revenge-boner speaking but that was an incredibly unsatisfying end to Maeve. Then again, a uniquely crafted dimension of literally infinite and eternal suffering is about the only thing that would have been. Still, her death was simply too quick.

Oh no, now he won't know about the fake.

Spent the past day reading through the whole series. SO DAMN GOOD. The action, plot and characterization were altogether just beyond ability to convey at the moment. The whole story was put together so well. This is one amazing piece of writing, fanfiction or otherwise. Thank you for writing such an amazing story. It's been a real joy to read it and I have no doubt it will be amazing to re-read it in the future. Hats off to you sir.

Cmon. I was looking forward to sadistic torture on Maev and Amaris.

I hate Tonks in this...honestly, she is so self-righteous and annoying.
I really, really hope Harry and her don't get together.

haha! harry's cotton candy comment had me rolling!