I really like the dynamic between the two.
But why is Sakura so harmless and defenseless? I mean, it's like she's just a normal girl and not a shinobi, someone who's had martial training for most of her life.
Even if she were a less than mediocre kunoichi (which she's not), basic techniques like breaking out of a hold or something should still be something she would at least attempt to do (even if she failed because Sasori counterattacked).
I mean, I do like it and I'm not abandoning it but that really bothers me. :/

I don't mean to write a bad review but I'm really disappointed with this fanfic. I was hoping it was a romance fic with SasoSaku and it turns out it's practically a Kibasaku fic. Also, the fact that Sasori is so abusive towards Sakura is upsetting. I'm sorry but I'm not enjoying this fanfic at all :(

Here I am, a review from 2018!
Hello, I really enjoy reading this fic. The idea is very entertaining and the story line is quite good, although I think there're a bit OOC or holes in some of the characters, I don't mind it. I just really like this SasoSaku fanfic. Sasori is a bastard. I wish to know what will happen next to Sakura but it is clearly that you didn't continue this fic anymore. Well, it's okay, I'm entertained. And you have such a good writing skills too, and ten years after this, I wonder how your skill improve.
Still disappointed that the story is discontinued though. So yeah, if you somehow find an inspiration to write the next chapters of this, I'll be here.
And thank you for writing this

Cool Beans! Really neat story. Sasosaku is my favorite pairing

ever planning on cont this wonderful fic of your? such a waste. tsk

yeah it was good..have you made more?

it was good, :)

[omg, is everyone stupid in this fanfic?] Sasori is such a bastard, and I know that you're trying to make him sound very nice and goody two shoes whenever he has an audience, but honestly is sounds very fake most of the time - I know that it's meant to sound fake, yes very aware of that fact, I mean to say is that you seem to have trouble making him seem charismatic to other characters. As a reader we can empathise with both Sakura and the other supporting characters. Whenever I see through Hinata's or Ino's eyes and try to see what Sasori was to them, it doesn't seem that convincing. Makes me think only an idiot would fall for that. [naruto is an idiot] Though, Itachi was a nice touch. I always love a good round of Sasori vs Itachi. [better than Sasuke, snake bastard] I hope people would stop acting so dense soon. It's frustrating to read.

Oh gosh I hope you continue this

Oh wow love this last part soooo mind blowingly creepy

Update ?

This is seriously one of the better SasoSaku fanfictions out there with the characters ACTUALLY being in character. However, I feel like Naruto would be a bit more mature to suspect at least SOMETHING of Sasori... Meh, it seems like he's playing a bit of a minor character so I can brush that off easily :) Update soon please!

Hit the follow button in hope to get to read a continue to this in a close future! :3

Too bad this isn't getting updated anymore. I really wanted to see what other mind games Sasori would do next.

please, finish it. i love it so much... thanks