Reviews for Seireitei no Jinchuuriki
Guest chapter 1 . 3/16
Type your review fic delete this trush fic
Monster King chapter 12 . 5/21/2019
Great job
GamerX568 chapter 9 . 3/13/2019
So, you underpowered all the Naruto characters except for Sasuke.
GamerX568 chapter 7 . 3/13/2019
It doesn't matter that she fell in love with Naruto. Yoruichi would not have fallen in love that quick. Also, you're really doing a Harem/multi-pairing story. So cliche.
GamerX568 chapter 4 . 3/13/2019
BenihimeRed Princess
KisukeBlond
Kushina is called Crimson Princess in lots of media
Minato and Kushina confirmed as Kisuke and Benihime
Makes perfect sense. Clearly nothing wrong
GamerX568 chapter 3 . 3/13/2019
So, even though Ichigo's and Orihime's hair are very similar colored(pretty much the same), Ichigo is a redhead while Orihime is an orangehead. Orihime's hair is closer to red anyways.
GamerX568 chapter 2 . 3/13/2019
Is the Soul King going to be The Shinigami, Hagaromo Otsutsuki, or neither?
Guest chapter 1 . 7/29/2016
Good...
That it discontinued
lalo80 chapter 1 . 12/15/2015
Porfa actualiza
Guy chapter 3 . 11/26/2015
well, first of all try to make it diverge from canon and focus on naruto more
Guest chapter 1 . 7/8/2015
Even in death, Naruto wont give up...
Guest chapter 4 . 5/15/2014
That was a bad idea. Inner-Sakura couldn't be Naruto's zanpakuto spirit. Zanpakuto spirits are entirely separate entities, and can be shared between two spirits. Also since Sakura is alive she can't be a spirit for a spirit. Besides this it's a good story.
NotJustAnotherPrettyFace chapter 12 . 2/20/2014
Aw! I'm sooooooooooo upset it has been discontinued! Is there another person who will take up this story and continue it? I would offer but, I'm not very experienced to do so and I don't have the proper time... :,(
meh101 chapter 11 . 2/3/2014
Read all 12 chapters, loved it and I'm sad it's not being continued. In ch 11 "The Third Attack" you seem to have forgotten that grimmjow lost an arm because you mentioned him using his "free arm" and that at the end it says "End of Chapter Ten" and "End of Chapter Eleven" for ch12. Really loved the plot line.
Guest chapter 12 . 6/21/2013
More plz
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