so jack protected ralph from roger so that he could have ralph for himself afterwards. hah

Wow, this was pretty good! Actually, it was amazing.

It wasn't what I expected, though I don't know exactly what it was that I WAS expecting, so I can't really say that.

But yeh, my eyes were practically glued to my computer screen. They kind of hurt now, like they're dry, so I was definitely in tune with the story as I read it which is a good thing, a really good thing.

5/5, love. Very nice story.

omigoshh I love this soo much,

It's like epicly awesome

-zgx

oh poor ralph! so samneric are sex slaves for roger? or does he just torcher them? are all the ones that stayed with ralph also caught and slaves? you should make a sequil this is really good!

Holy shit, that was some intense Jack/Ralph! Makes me wonder how did Jack learn all that stuff...lol

Oh man, wish this was more than just a oneshot, this deserves to be like 10 chapters of epic smut!

make a sequel! i'm reading this book for english and this certainly makes it more interesting

Hey! i don't know you but i totally agree with your fanfiction! omg it was so good! i love jack! he is so hot! lol! reveiw me please! lets be friends lol xD baii bai! write another fanfiction like this lol ! :D

keep on writing this. this was really good i enjoyed it. you did a good job

WOAH!Um...VERY Blunt, honey bear, pookie, have me edit first. There were a few gramma mistakes and the whole asshole thing even made me go WOAH! Other than that it was good! The Jalph was yummy, always is. Hope I'm not being rude, but constructive critism is good right?

Wow, Dani...that was...unexpected. Good writing, even if I don't approve of WHAT you were writing.

that was one of the best Lord of the Flies stories i have ever read and just like Lady Azura said there is nothing better then

Jack/Ralph

i thank you for the awesome fic, love to see more

There's nothing better than Jack/Ralph. Seriously. It's my OTP for LotF. I'm actually thinking of writing my own Jack/Ralph fic soon.

Anyways, good job!