Yaaaayyyy I got through it! Nice story you wrote here despite my aggravation with...a good chunk of the characters. Lol. While curious over which "old enemy" you'll use for the sequel I'm gonna hold off on reading it until it's finished. Thanks for laughs and for utilizing Sango and minimizing Kagome!

Siiiigggghhhhh. Fucking hell. Well at least there was a happy hug shared. Don't know why Kagome told him to shut up tho. It's a valid question. And hints at how much he missed her. Oh wait, she ignores his validity anytime it suits her whim. Nevermind.

Aaaaaauuuuuugggggghhhhhhhhhhhhh Kagome IS still a bitch. Great. And the others(except for Kuwabara at first) just stood there agreeing with Kagome's stance in that argument and thinking Inuyasha stupid and deserving of such unneeded abuse. My word is that fucked up. He was even in the right or at least valid in his point. Being late IS late regardless of how long and Kagome wanting to down play 20 minutes or so as not being late(when it most certainly is) and getting upset at her overprotective (who is such with good reason) boyfriend wanting to know why is frankly suspicious to me. If it had been the other way around she'd blow him being late by 10 minutes out of proportion. And how can she not see the issue (that she should have a problem with too) of a grown ass married man regardless if she knows him still hugging her and trying to latch onto her out of the blue like that? It's inconsiderate how she still treats Inuyasha that way in regards to Koga even now that they're together.

LMAO!
Boooo! Boooooooo!
I don't really like how they got her so easily. Caused me to not enjoy the intimate eating they did and everything else. I mean seriously they slept with her then left abruptly with one doing so without her consent(coughrapecough), she doesn't actually really know either of them, she feels used and abandoned by both and no apology or attempt to make amends is given, they bluntly tell her that her feelings don't matter and what they did before doesn't matter because they now claim to love her. Which essentially translates to what matters is what they want and how they feel for she's a nonfactor other than being something they desire, an object for them to have if they so choose. That's what I get anyways. And she's tricked and manipulated with old and circular reasoning about her not accepting all of herself and if she just does that then she'll clearly see she should disregard all reason and how she feels and all the legit issues with this and just let them have their way. What crap. I mean I'm not too big on drama but I like the conflict to remain until its properly resolved and not brushed under a rug or conveniently forgotten/forgiven at a quick pace. Personally the words on my lips to them would have remained: no, don't, stop, and liar for an indeterminate amount of time. I can/am continuing to learn about and accept all of myself and have no need for two assholes like them to do so. Shame Sango didn't realize that part. It's what she was doing before they kidnapped her. (speaking of which her new friends suck for letting the kidnapping happen) I feel like their relationship is kinda a sham. But that's just me I guess.

Booooo! Boooooo! BOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
All they did was manipulate her with bullshit and circular reasoning into giving them an unwarranted chance out of her own desire to have just a chance to experience lasting faithful love with someone due to craving to be rid of her loneliness. What bastards. And she played right into the mind game! Poor fool. Be hilariously sad if they dumped her about a week later or so, deciding they've had their fill of her.

Don't believe them Sango! They already fooled you once!
Is it strange that I was imagining Sango's freak out to be more dramatic? Like...I expected more property damage from her powers and for her to hurl herself out a window just to get away from them. As it is I now expect her to think them liars using a new tactic to manipulate her as she does her best to avoid them. Which means they have to work twice as hard to regain her trust. As they should.

Yayyyyy Sango! Give em all hell! XD "collect our third" indeed. Pffft!

[Irritated Irish Noises]

Meh.
Did Sango hear all this?

Oh fucking FINALLY! Koga better not die!
I'm glad Sango was able to end her fight in a quick, efficient and ruthless manner. Hopefully that keeps up.

Yeah that's right Sango! You don't need assholes like Hiei and Kurama! You find your zest for life boo!
I will be greatly amused if Koga realizes she IS that Sango and runs up to hug her like a long lost friend.

What the shit Sango!? You can't trust these demons (or people in general really) so thoroughly just cuz they're all nice and sincere for a time, that fucked up incident with Kurama should have taught you that! And as for Kurama being all tired and "always alone" so what. Fuck that guy.
And will that one gay guy ever finish giving his advice to her?

Sssoooooo can Hiei tell she was raped by his fox friend? Being able to smell all the emotions and whatever...

What the fuck?
What the shit?
What the actual hell!? I do NOT support a rapist Kurama/Yoko. So not cool. Ew. Just ew. And this was part of the plan to distance himself?! What bullshit! Total over kill! I wouldn't want her to continue her friendship with him let alone enter a relationship with him pulling shit like that! Let's see, he forcefully held her down against her will, refused to accept no, ignored her rejections, forced himself on her repeatedly, delighted in her anger and fear, bound her abilities so she couldn't defend herself, and if I'm reading the hints right drugged her for the duration in his act of raping her. Knowing full well he did not have her consent and mocking her for it. Disgusting. He could have very well caused her to keel over into suicide with this stunt regardless of the fact she is currently emotionally unstable. Awful friend. Awful. Bad potential mate too. Hiei at least had the decency, the moral fiber, to only take what she freely gave and then only AFTER she begged him verbally to lay intimate with her of her own free will. It also paints Yoko in a bad light from another angle as well in that he HAD to resort to doing something so despicable just to get laid. Pathetic piece of shit fox. Already know Inuyasha would absolutely detest this Yoko, he has a zero tolerance for rapists.
Siiiggghhhhh and I was liking this soo much. Guess I should continue just to see how it ends...

What...the actual hell?