Are you gonna finish this because. I. Am. In. Love. With. It.

Very cute and exactly something Red X would do.

I love the ending! Lol.

aawsome

Dude I like this story it is sooooo funny!

very cute, slightly choppy, but cute non the less.

LOL! I didn't think that a Teen Titan would ever kiss a ciminal. Especially not Raven. Looks like I thought wrong.
I really liked the necklace, rose and love letter. Red X is so passonite!
I also liked how you put in Raven getting ready to fight him and throwing him out the window.
I mean I don't think that Raven would be like, "Oh. Hey X! Want to go make out?" Or something like that.
Please keep writing. Good job!

Great job with this! :D You really captured Red X's clever and cunningness - I wondered each time how he was able to disappear so quickly, and the dialogue in the summary was hilarious. XD

Penny ToughGirl

Interesting. I noticed that you switched to third person in one paragraph. It was a little confusing.

Nice job. I liked it a lot, but I noticed a couple of little grammatical errors I thought I'd point out. Just after the kiss, you slip into third person from Raven's point of view. It's very confusing. Also, I think the word you were looking for was "kettle" not "kennel". ;)
Other than that I think you did a good job with the story. The characters seem to beset right and not too OOC, which is impressive since you say this is your first TT story. :)

Amusing.

Red X is just full of surprises isn't he?

The note was funny and I love Red X and Raven stories :D

love it

Hmm, I liked it. The only thing... In your dedication, uh, it's y'all not ya'll.

Sorry, I've prolly just made you frown but that's just a lil pet peeve of mine.

Not that I'm Grammar Queen anyway, lol, a friend of mine has a bigger pet peeve over it - guess it rubbed off on me.

Anyway... It was a nice fic. Though I think you did confused your tenses a bit.