Wait...he doesn't die, does he?!

This was so deep. Man, I haven't read something like this in a long time, and this hits all the spots. My emotion is on a roller coaster with this ending. So deep, that I can't help but to like it.

/Wow/ they're stubborn bastards. That was impressive.

A perfectly valid outline. It's rather impressive that this was the result if that's all there was to it, though.

It's really ... sad and sweet, and it touched my heart that I was crying. Every dialogs and events seem to send different kind of feelings to me as a reader. Everything seem so well planned, and every sentence that Shinichi and Kaito exchanged seem to have more deep meaning, but at the same time they have so much mystery that it seems the only one who understand are themselves. I can really see the bond of friendship from them. And it's just like the usual friendship with sweet now and bitter next time, with fun evenr yesterday and fight tomorrow. However, everything will lead to much understanding for both of them, even if it will need a long time. Even if the try to create a distance, the bond is still there and they can't help to watch for each other from the shadow. And, I kind of understand Kaito's feeling on the last chapter. Sometimes, with a close friend of mine, I don't aware just how much I have open up myself. I let her see through me so easily and I become so afraid that she will knows the true me, and becomes disappointed (she is an observant after all).

I think, instead of drama and romance, it is better for you to classify this story as hurt/comfort and friendship. I like their interaction with their girlfriend and I like how the look so stupid and their girls understand them the best. However, the main point is the bond between Shinichi and Kaito, right? Also, I love how you choose the tittle of this story and how you write Shinichi as a sun and Kaito as a moon. Well, basically, I like every single things in this ffn that make me curious, make me can't predict the end, make me cry, make me smile, make my chest hurt, and I really can't point one by one, I'm so sorry. I will be honest with you (although it's not important at all, but I thought maybe you want to hear), that actually the filter I make to search DC FFn always to make me able to find KaiShin/ShinKai FFn. And I know you make it clear that it's a friendship but the reader can think otherwise, but this one is really great that I don't ... really want to see the chance for Shinichi and Kaito as a couple in this FFn. So, yeah, it's so awesome. So, keep writing more this kind of FFn okay :) and sorry if some part of my review happen to upset you, and sorry for my bad english.

Kensy Echo

Wow. Freaking amazing.

Wow that was amazing...

This is so beautifully bitter-sweet. I loved the ending, how it took time for them to work things out, how things weren't exactly perfect. Elegantly written! Loved it. :) Jelp

...you made me feel so...open; they really penetrate, you know... this would make such a good yaoi fic... it practically is one except for the fact that they both have girlfriends...

... Does Kaito even know Shinichi's secrets? XD

I can't review on the last chapter because I already did... but I really love your writing style. I loved the ending too, as bittersweet as it was. I really hope you write a sequel to this! _ I really want those two to get together. Stupid Kaito for breaking Shinichi's heart :(( I love them both. Thank you for the wonderful story!

I can't wait to read more. I'm literally on the edge of my seat. Aoko and Kaito are going out? D: *sadface*

Although I must admit that I was hoping desperately for more blatant Kaito/Shinichi, this fic in itself was gorgeous. Your characterizations are perfect, and Shinichi's trick nearly took my breath away when the pieces finally fell together. Thank you so much, this was beautiful.

you made me tear up at the last chapter. i loved this. this is a brilliant fic :) thank u for sharing .

hehe, i liked the chapter a lot :D