Creepy but good :D...weirdly is made me laugh lol

still love it!

wow. that was... absolutely crap. Besides the fast that there's no real humor it's actually very cruel to make fun of Malik's past, especially when his father ruined his back. Have some common sense, don't post this ignorant crap here

-Convulses with hysterics- In a way, this is actually more believable than the Rite of the Tomb Guardians story!

Haha, the heat fumes in the spa was the thing that got you high XD Lol This is great

I laughed so hard that I nearly fell off my chair. Great Story..

*laugh* wow XD haha it took me a bit to understand it XD but ur right...now that i look at it, the yami does look like a porcupine XD haha...XD

XD His spleen! hahahahahaha wtf. Wow I liked this, it was good for a laugh, very creative. hahaha nice