great

this was amazing

Wish there was more

But seeing as the author haven't been updating for over 10 years I see that as unlikely

Liked it a lot. Warning for a lot of societies.

"They will wax lyrics about Ten toes one day, i'm sure" Trader, Terraria.

*claps* This was an excellent way to deal with the Dark side. Let them be pierced by their own sword and bleed out in a hell of their own choosing.

This was a very well thought out and written story, good job.
I'll add this to my story favorites.

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VERY interesting take on life if the Dark Lord succeeded. Thank you very much for sharing.

Interesting story. Thank you for sharing your writing.

hmmmmmm great great

That was creepy but it was really good

Chilling. All the more so because it's so easy to believe that things would have gone this way had their wishes come true.

I only feel sympathy for the poor girls they kidnapped and the children who grow a conscious! What a horrible life!

You know... aside from the problems of most pureblooded families being related to each other, resulting in inbreeding (and thus causing future generations to become magically and intellectually weaker over time), the story also shows how the removal of a large group of people with specialised skills will cause the breakdown of society.

Lucius mentions that the more aristocratic Death Eaters had expected the Death Eaters in the lower social classes to fill some of the gaps caused by Light-aligned businesses closing. Unfortunately, it didn't occur to most of them that these minions had become criminals in the first place because they didn't have any useful skills. Even if they wanted to improve themselves, they'd need both training and capital to start a business, neither of which it occurred to the Death Eater nobility to provide.

And lastly, anyone with even a basic understanding of biology could tell you that there is no such thing as a superior bloodline, and what actually keeps a society strong is a diverse and healthy gene pool. Naturally, the Death Eaters, being supremacists, wouldn't hear of it until it was too late.

whoa