Hey, just wandering, did you take the prequel down? Or was it moved to another authors page? Please let me know! Loved, loved, loved the story by the way, thank you for not ending it unhappily!

You suck at writing. You should stop.

So this was my first time reading an Alice/Jasper AH story and I guess, I like this one. Of course, it's no masterpiece, for the plot being too cheesy, but it's well written and sweet. Thanks for sharing.

perfect. couldnt stop reading

Good one

well at least Paul has Leah :)

Did Faye forget all about Paul because she seemed to forget he was one of the constant father figures in her life.

oh Maria deserved it the vindictive soulless bitch

Omg its so wrong. Its a sinking ship. I specifically read this fanfic rooting for Jasper and Alice only to find I'm rooting to my very soul for Paul

Now Alice is being unbearable.

I like what you did there with Maria and her "pregnancy."

OMG Paul…. the scene was heart wrenching.

I am not in any way hating on your fanfic at all. I like it actually. Jasper drives me mad though. Despite the fact that i don't like Maria as a person, Jasper owed it to her and Alice to break it off before anything. Cheating on his fucking fiancee shows no respect for his relationship with Maria and towards Alice

The way Jasper handled it all is ridiculous, selfish and immature.

Jesus, normally i would sympathise with the Maria in her position but she is unbearable and unlikable. Not relatable at all.
Jasper and Alice asap please hahaha

Omg, howling! A flying tooth! Hahahahahahahahahahaha! Bitch had it comin!