whee

that was dramatic, but just a little fast paced

but who cares? It was good

aw this is so sweet! and im glad that he was alright!

Nice oneshot. But proofread (closely), please.

~Rayestar

well done, except in the first part, there is a clash in accuracy...first oyu say his nails are pink and then you say green...not a huge thing, just something minor that i noticed!

AWW! I love it!

XD you're welcome... even if i didnt quite help. i swear if cloud does another like this one ill have a seizure.

so reno's okay, cloud's okay... lets just let them celebrate at last XD