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Lexy chapter 3 . 7/16/2012 Awww * goes and lays down next to Dean , ya know to help keep him warm* . Calm down Dean if the fever gets worse you'll want the extra warmth and besides if we keep you as warm as possible maybe that fever'll break and you can start feeling better a lot sooner , now go back to sleep |
Lexy chapter 2 . 7/16/2012 Actually Jared,Jensen and Misha are rediculously pretty I mean seriously those eye lashes ( which i know a boy that's like a grade or so below me with rediculously long eye lashes , and I (female ) have long eyelashes but they're thin because they fallout a good deal), and those beautiful eyes and just everything *dies from pretty overload* |
SimplyOut chapter 3 . 2/6/2009 I liked the ending :D |
twinchaosblade chapter 3 . 1/22/2009 I'm terribly sorry for taking me ages to find the time to try and catch up with all the drabbles. *hangs head in shame* Anyway, I'm deeply enjoying these installments for sickDean and caringSammy. And I love that your last lines are always structurally the same, with Dean voicing different emotions. Plus, having it end with the admission that Dean feels safe how tenderly Sam cares for him, leaves me with a warm impression myself. In fact I feel as suggly warm as Dean himself. Great drabbles! |
supernaturalsammy67 chapter 3 . 1/22/2009 AW this was awesome hun! i love this fic! :) sorry im so late reviewing! x awesome take! :) |
Soncnica chapter 3 . 1/21/2009 I loved the last lines in every drabble (Dean feels cold, warmer, save) they go really well with what Sam is trying to do to/with Dean in the story itself... S. |
Soncnica chapter 2 . 1/21/2009 hun, I have no more cocoa left...it's all on the keyboard...LOL this was awesome but kind of...weird in a good way...idk. like..ah...because of the society you can't touch a person just for fun...and if you do, then just like that, you're considered gay or something. not that there is anything wrong with that, but God you should be able to touch a person just because you feel like it and not worry about how society will see that inocent touch...you know what I mean? S. |
Soncnica chapter 1 . 1/21/2009 you killed me with Sammy comfort... I would need THAT every night...I get cramps in my leg and it hurts so much...so I feel Dean's pain. |
amyblair chapter 3 . 1/18/2009 Those were fun. I particularly liked cramp and lash. Nice job. |
Dream Painter chapter 3 . 1/15/2009 Of course Dean's fine-heaven forbid he'd admit to having a fever of all And that last portion was really cute. |
jasper03 chapter 1 . 1/13/2009 “Don’t touch it, Sam,” he half-ordered, half-begged. -The poor boy! I liked the half-begging part...I like a begging Dean...makes me feel better. ;) Sam massaged gently, breath catching in time with Dean’s muffled whimpers. -Love a whimpering Dean... let's just face it, I love to see him in pain. *sadistic smile* “Sadistic Bitch!” “Breathe, Jerk.” - love the whole bitch/jerk thing, too cute! I think Sam may be a touch sadistic... |
Twinchy chapter 3 . 1/13/2009 This tripple drabble makes me feel all kinds of heart-warming because Sammy took such gentle and good care of his older brother. I'm sure Dean felt warmer equal parts for Sammy's care-giving and the warm blankets when he went to sleep. |
NC Girl chapter 3 . 1/12/2009 I swear, your drabbles get better and better every week! These are just wonderful. I really like how you tied them together with the last lines of each and I like how Dean lets go of control just a little bit with each one. I think the second one, however, is my favorite. I don't know exactly why, but there is something quiet and touching and just perfectly believable about everything from the actions to the dialogue. However, this part of the third one is so descriptive that it just popped right off the page: "...cracks a bleary eye to take in Sam sitting beside him, trapping him in the blankets." It's the "trapping him in the blankets" part that caught my attention, I think, because I remember that feeling from when I was a kid. It's a nice image. Beautiful job, all the way around. |
KatyMM chapter 3 . 1/12/2009 Aw! Sick Dean is just irresistable isn't he? These were fun and cute. |
Orange Autumn chapter 3 . 1/12/2009 Aw, so sweet! |