| Reviews for Unexpected Places |
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Guest chapter 7 . 3/13 Sé q el color favorito de Griff podria ser el negro practicamente xq asi se viste pero igual me emocioné cuando se lo contó, ¡muy bien! Ella es una buenaza, no me desespera como la tonta de millie... |
Guest chapter 22 . 9/18/2014 Just like to point out you said her birthday was October 1st a few chapters ago... |
ruth.syers.5 chapter 26 . 12/14/2013 Hello emptyonideas my name is Ruth Syers :) I have to say this was the most AMAZING JUMPER FANFICTION EVER! I'm a huge fan of Jumper and of Griffin :) Hes my favorite character and I was very impressed, enthralled and by far blown away by your story! I've read many Jumper fanfics before but yours was by far the best I've ever read. I hope you continue writing. Yo'u're an amazing writer and I hope to see more of your work! PS Griffin and Ella's chemistry is THE BOMB! I love them! |
lollielol chapter 1 . 6/15/2013 That was PERFEEEECT ! ( a sequel maybe ? but you do what you want ;) ... ) Everything was perfect : the way you wrote it, you described their relationship, it was so natural and so not "cliché" ! Perfecto ! THANK U ! |
Seraphina Herondale chapter 26 . 11/30/2012 I got through all but the last two chapters of this yesterday evening, I just finished it this morning and I'm not even sure if you'll read this review because you wrote the story so long ago but just in case... I absolutely loved it! It was my first Jumper story and I didn't know if there would be any good ones with the section being so small but I sorted the stories into highest reviews ('cause they're usually the best) and yours came up. So glad I read it, it might have inspired me to write my own Jumper story :) |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 26 . 11/19/2012 Why does no one ever think of going on a NASA tour, jumping to get a space suit, looking at the Moon through a telescope, setting up a base camp there? Or at least using the Jumps to go right behind Paladins, grab, jump, and drop them? They really wouldn't be a challenge at all as long as your awake when they attack. |
The One Who Reads Too Much chapter 21 . 11/19/2012 Hah! I see what you did there at the end. |
Marzipan chapter 26 . 8/28/2012 Awwwww! That was so sweet! Great story, I loved every chapter and how Ella was not a Mary Sue and grew into her love for Griffin. |
Marzipan chapter 24 . 8/28/2012 I want my own Jaimie Bell! So cute! I like how he came and apologized! |
Guest chapter 23 . 8/28/2012 That ending of the chapter was so sweet! He'll protect her! I love your story, Griffin deserves more love, preferably that's not slash and with a great OC like Ellie! |
Marzipan chapter 20 . 8/28/2012 Oh you cheeky girl/boy?!;)Finally! Squeeeeeeeeeee! First kiss my favorite scene in every story! |
Marzipan chapter 19 . 8/28/2012 Oh god that dream scene- I hate character deaths and I believed it for a minute. Not a fun minute let me tell you... Kiss(finally!) I felt so many feels this chapter. GreAt job! |
Marzipan chapter 9 . 8/28/2012 Ahhhhh, awkward! I just want to see the sexual tension until they explode!;) I just died from the awkwardness I was like no no no no oh shit! Ha ha, I'm a bit crazy I squeal like a fan girl when stuff like this happens. |
JustCallMeWhatever chapter 26 . 8/1/2012 That was freaking adorable! I loved this story. Good job! :) |
ChiyoChi-Yamamoto chapter 26 . 5/4/2012 *cries* its over! Why! Anyhow. I loved it. So. so. Qmuch. I really can't find griffin stories anywhere. |