and sorry if my earlier review was a bit scattered.

nuts! i wanted to see christopher's reaction to edmund's story. oh well. this was a great story anyway. by the way, my mom has a friend named moony that i call aunt moony. she has a son named christopher and he just got married about a week ago. i like this.

This was so amazing. Edmund is one of my favorites and you did a great job with him

Oh, my gosh! Poor Edmund. He needs to tell that he sees the White Witch and in the real world!

It's great so far!

I loved it but I think you should've put Susan in it more. That is my only advice otherwise it was perfect.

Maybe Edmund should take a holiday to Mexico and warm up! Even Jadis will like it!

I like you're joke about the English teacher. Was that a reference to the tough teacher you had in school?

So basically Narnia has a no person over 18 rule to join the club?

What a sucky club! Who's *bright* idea was that? It shouldn't be about age but maturity of who goes to Narnia.

It was an amazing story.

Very good story, indeed. Very fascinating.

I love ur story. ( I forgot to post on 23/24)

I looooooveeeddd itttt

amazing story! i will definitely be checking out those oneshots! thanks so much for writing this and sharing it here! i wish you good luck and no writers block in all of your future writings.

Hi, I'd like to say that I really enjoyed the story. The way you have written it keeps you hooked till the end (and I love your Edmund torturing mind because I love Edmund _~).

However, I have a few constructive criticism:

- At some points the story felt a bit rushed. This is more clear on the first chapter. Don't worry about writing too long, you are a good writer, your readers will follow you along the story even if you take your time setting the scenery and developing the situation.

- The ending to the curse made me feel a bit frustrated because, even though I knew Edmund had to do it himself, I did wish that his brothers and sisters could be more involved. Like maybe all of them, not only Peter finding him at the end, or at least Susan and Lucy talking to him about what he almost did. I really liked most of the choices you made with Susan's character, but I did feel that, since she almost lost her brother, she could be a bit more involved.

Having said that, I think this was a real good fic and I wish I could read more Edmund fics from you :)

wow. i loved the whole story. great job.