If you add egoshipping the story would be 11 ovee 10. With Gary still having his powers and facing up Ash to win Misty.

Did Musty make out with Gary? It seem but it was nit clear. Chaoter 16. Excellent story.

One of the best stories ever written, in my opinion. It has a nice pace and if you are a pokéshipper and are looking for a fanfic with rather mature content, this won't let you down. Promise.

The characters where quite like in the anime, albeit older, weirder versions and really enjoyable. And the plot was very nice. Overall, there is extremely little to complain about if you ask me.

I can't deny that some things feel out of place. I don't really have an example, but this entire Eggborn-thing felt weird. Not that it was bad, actually, it was one of the better and funnier things about this fanfic. But it felt like something that definately wouldn't be a part of the canon Pokémon universe. And it is what makes this fanfic so good: having weird stuff that no one could pull off just as nice.

It's incredibly sad that you won't make a sequel to it, bcz, I'd really want to know what happened to that kid.

I thank you from the bottom of my heart for this lovely piece of litterature and hope that you never stop writing amazing fanfics like this one. Thank you!

Aah in love with this chapter

Ahh love it

Omg aaah suspense

Omg itching to know what Oak did!

Omg and I love that Gary and Misty are getting along!

Omg they are too funny

Omg was she awake all along?

Omg love how Delia is to misty

Omg love Misty and how she tries to ve seductive

Love how things are building up for them

Omg aaaaah i hope misty stops taking the pills

Wow Misty, surprising

Kinda hate Dawn right now lol