it is a very nice story.

good

the story is wonderful, I love it from start to finish, hahaha greetings, see you bye!

Okay, so to start I realize that this story is more than a decade old and you might not even be active on this account any more, but I had a nitpick issue with this chapter. Immediately after the four general zombies attack Jiraya and he escapes, it mentions that the samurai general's blade is covered in Jiraya's blood. My question is; why doesn't the samurai haul ass back to Naruto, have him use the shadow straw dummy no jutsu, and ritual seppuku Jiraya's internal organs into meat paste?

Where can I find naruto the chimera

I’m not tryna be rude but SPACE OUT UR FUCKING PARAGRAPHS

blasfemos mira que eleguir a temari i tayuya serien mejores conpañeras yugito fem kyuubi una por ser jinchuriki igual que el i la otra por ser la reina quitzune que es asi que lo digo de nuevo BLASFEMOS OJOALA ARDAIS EN EL INFIERNO POR ELLO ETERNAMENTE SUFRIENDO LAS PEORES TORTURAS

You disgust me, anybody who uses oc that are even kind of important ruin stories. Not to mention crossovers which is the stupidest fucking idea ever. Basically go fuck yourself, your story is shit, go die and delete your stories because you're a pathetic embarrassment

Wait, hold up... Sarutobi "SASUKE"?...

I’ve read this story multiple times and every time I know it doesn’t have a an ending which bums me out but I don’t care. It’s a fantastic read and WAY different than other fics! Hope one day you get inspired again but if you don’t just wanna say thanks for the amazing read! I know these fics are a ton of work and I for one super appreciate it all the time and energy you put into it!

Have a feeling this is going to be a harem fanfic with whiny needy females. This is great except the harem tone.

BOI you NEED to do the disclaimer it is like the most important part of the fic lol

Sry, this is not my cup of tea...i HATE when the MC becomes a monster when a child and even enjoys it...i mean thats a psychopath and not a good MC, at least for me...if those happened to a real person he would become quite pessimistic about life and might start to hate the people who did that to him...but he will not just randomly become a psychopathic evil demon! I would have tried to run away way before i started to have so much hatred for them... not to talk about a child... he would go to sarutobi and tell him his problems and cry...if he is not listened to he would run away...BUT NOT become an evil demon child randomly...like WTF?

Yeah, a little too secretive jiji, was... but if Naruto knew and told someone who his father was..or that he was the kyuubi...as there are spys everywhere...it would have easily spread around the villagers and eventually to their enemies! I only hope this will not devolve into another stupid "I HATE EVERYONE" story, where Naruto is an evil idiot who hates everyone for no apparent reason!

Oh my god how stupid can they be? Fucking kill Deidara and Sasori! He literally knows almost everything about them and all they do is fucking sit around like little bitches and drink wine?