By the way - it's Tisroc, not Tirsoc. Just saying :)
Enjoying it! I want Lucy healed already! :)

Before this story arc I was considering stopping reading, it was getting a bit repetitive, but I figured I'd push on and see what this arc was like and... now I'm hooked. Cause LUCY! I really like what you're doing with her, it's fascinating.
A few spelling/grammar blips but apart from that well written and interesting. I'm definitely keeping reading.

Yes! LUCY! :) :) :)

BTW I do like Peter-Inara. Fits. Also like him getting teased :) and by her.

Media snippets. Great. :)

Forgot to say this in my review of the last chapter. Just... what is with the taking characters from the next books and twisting them to darkness? I mean, Jill, Eustace, Lady of the Green Kirtle... please tell me they get back to being nice people! I mean I know they're possessed but...
Rant over. Sorry. I do like this story though, plenty. But still, that's my main issue with it. However, interesting. I do miss you landing the characters in to look around them and follow that rather than a few minutes, hours or days later when they've at least partially adjusted. I liked the first impressions. However.
Hope this doesn't come across as too... angsty? Is that the word I want?

Wait, you're saying the White Witch and the Lady of the Green Kirtle are sisters - so Jadis' sister who was winning so she spoke the Deplorable Word... is the Lady of the Green Kirtle.
You may have just blown my mind.

I think the fact that you are a bit more blunt about reviews made the guy try to bite off your head

Wow. I did not expect this. I like the new people you have put in the story, lots of new story lines to put together. I look forward to reading the rest of this.

It looks like I have my work well cut out for me...

I finally finished your magnificent story. One word sums it up, AWESOME!

"Isn't it always so?" the tall man said philosophically, "When men come together as a group they seek a leader and having found one, are easily swayed and led into performing the most atrocious of acts without thought… because they are afraid of leading. They wish to be one with the crowd. To be faceless and nameless and blameless."

Same. Same. Was immediately reminded of all those dictators we had/have. You've set up the context really well, so props to you for that! Now that you have over 100 chapters, I'm not sure if you've already corrected it, but your sentences sometimes lack appropriate punctuations which makes reading them a lil weird. Using the above as an example, I think this will flow better:

"Isn't it always so?" the tall man said philosophically, "When men come together as a group, they seek a leader, and having found one, are easily swayed and led into performing the most atrocious of acts without thought… because they are afraid of leading. They wish to be one with the crowd. To be faceless and nameless and blameless."

Just a note :)

After so many years, we've finally reached the end!

So it looks as if Susan's longtime companions has decided to stay in Narnia after all of the adventures they've had. Even though the world seems to be mostly at peace and with a lot of rebuilding going on, there's still danger lurking around. The Silver Chair will happen unless Susan can somehow prevent the Witch from killing hair, and she saw how some of the others may eventually reach their own end. I'm happy she does find some happiness before all this comes about. Peter's off fighting the Giants again while Lucy has the support of her father and Polly as she tries to make amends in Archenland. And Edmund is helping to rebuild one of Narnia's old enemies should be interesting as well.

Thank you for the story - it's been a great adventure for us as well, and I hope someday we'll see bits and pieces of what else has been going on after the war.

thank you!
It was perfect,
I appreciate your hard work on this climatic adventure,
great job,
love to see future excerpts now and then,
love,
beachchick3

OH MY GOD, THIS IS AMAZING! I found this fic five hours ago, and haven't put my phone down since! You saved me from an endless road trip, and I will forever me grateful! I'm going to stop typing now, because I want to keep reading :)