I know this story is old, but just having these random heroes drop into the narrative with no introduction at all is just bad writing, reference or not
And just having Asuka act like an asshole for no reason is just boring at this point, and killed my motivation to read this particular story to the end
Hopefully the rest are better

Well, having now finally read this, I definitely enjoyed it, as I have with the other SOE stories of both worlds. I know you might have addressed this or someone may have brought it up, but for that little cameo at NERV-2, why a Dr. Logan instead of a Dr. McCoy, given the presence of Summers, Grey, and Worthington?

Aside from that, two thumbs up all around on this tale. And count me in among those with ideas involving your take on Miss Horaki. (More on that in a PM to come.)

And what make you think anyone would read a super fic on hikari? The most useless character in Eva history? Even the writer know that other wise he would not have force shinji sorry ass into this fic? You all so busy trying grab everyone attention and trying to act like a smart ass that you don't stop to think how your action will effect other people nor how foolish you look saying such garbage. The true is you too lazy to give a guy like kensuke a chance instead you want to keep using the same tiresome characters like shinji, writing the same tiresome stories over and over and over and over again. What the difference between this and the other superwomen stories? They are the same bullshit. You all think it cool being negative on a good character like kensuke yet turn a piece of shit like shinji into a hero? What the hell going on out here?

You all can learn a lot from a writer name adam kadmon. A writer who write different stories and uses different characters for each stories including kenuske. In fact the writer is written a super fic on kensuke called Covennant Red. A great fic that better then all these super women fic and proves people would read a super fic whit kenuske if you give that damn man a chance unlike other people. In fact the writer has written a few more good stories on kensuke which prove whit the right person, whit the right mind set you can do good things whit this man. You all should give adam kadmon fics a read unless you like reading the same stories over and over again?

You be surprise how many people would like to see a super kensuke fic. Just because you and the other ungrateful assholes don't like him don't mean he don't have his fans...dick head.

Pity this wasn't a Hikari/Shinji story. I don't have an issue with Hikari/Toji, but reading it as the main pairing just isn't my cup of tea.

Well, that was a nice read! Thank you very much for the story. And this story deserves more reviews, so here is one... ;-)

One thing that isn't even talked of here, is that Gendo's scheme, eventually mutated into 'redefine the human condition, be reunited with wife, use anyone and anything to achieve this goal.'

Rei III ironically has every reason to be loyal to Gendo and every reason to hate Aksagi. She didn't contradict Gendo when he said she would have just aborted her soul.

And I wouldn't mind Instrumentality.

We figured out why no one in the command center carries weapons, because no doubt if she had a gun on her Misato's going to snap one day and just plaster Gendo's brains all over the wall "For All Humanity".

Nooooooooooooooo whyyyyyy
Better be good

Thank you so much for making me fall in love with my favorite character once again. This was an amazing story and there was nothing i could about this story that i did not like.

... good story...

... ok... i continue read...

NICE!

I really enjoyed this iteration of SoE. Thinks changed enough to be different, but still relatable. Shinji and Asuka vs the MP Eva's was well done. But the thing I most liked was her transformation phrase. I could picture her sense of wonder every time she changed