YOU DEVIL, YOU. I don't think I've logged into in the LONGEST time but I have done so to drop a review on this lovely little oneshot!

Safe to say it is strangely hard for me to find any sort of Zelda fanfiction that I feel really (skyward) strikes a chord with me but this was one of them. Delightfully short but somehow jam-packed full of enough to make me adequately giddy! I attribute this to the quality of your subtleties - characterisation, small gestures. It's also refreshing to see such an 'accurate' portrayal of the two characters (imho, anyway). Link didn't seem too entirely useless and Sheik had that glorious, Sheik-ish mystery about him that people seem to forget sometimes.

Personally I found the first two and a half paragraps really summed it up and I wouldn't have minded seeing it round off before the "On a whim" section, but you did mention that you were going to fix it and the mental image was cute so I can't complain too much!

You have done them justice, my friend!

/the review that is longer than the story, sigh

aw that was so cute! Short and sweet and to the point! LOVED IT!

This is extraordinarily well-written. Bravo to you.

That was really great. Short but really good.

aw. that was so adorable! The ending didn't die, no worries. i thought it was very cute!

That was pretty cool. I liked Backlash so i decided to check out your other works on Zelda.

Could have been longer, but cool.

:heart: I loved it! very idealistic and loving.

For something that is Links POV, wouldn't you say "I" instead of "He"? It makes it sound sort of third person.