Wow... that was just... wow. It was sad and happy and everything in between. I really enjoyed this story!

Two things. One: it's 'break' and 'brake'. 'Break' means to pause; to recess. 'Brake' is the thing on your car used to make it stop.

Example 1: We stopped for a break after doing 43 math problems.

Example 2: A boy ran out in front of the car. The driver immediately stomped on the brakes, but he was too late.

Two: Good job, I look forward to readings more stories.

I think that you should only write an epilogue if you feel like it, as it's your story it should have the ending you want.

I've thoroughly enjoyed reading this over the past year or 2 or however long it's been. Thanks for giving me something awesome to read 3

Finally!after reading all the list of storys i had i will start reading this,read the first 3 chaps long time ago but didnt continue due to other stories well hopefully ill finish this story for tomorrow and im very glad that is finished(better be a good end eh?) XD

Yet another good chapter, glad to hear that the new one will be up soon!

there were a few typo's but meh, it's bound to happen.

YAY~ can't wait for the next one though x3 3

Nice..i love vampire stories and this will be no exception XD,Roxas will use the keyblades or he is just a normal boy?XD

Umm pretty nice story,i like it,but where is Roxas?XD i hope he gets to appear at the next chap

AHHHH! SO GLAD! I've been waiting for this forever! haha good chapter

btw sorry about all the crap you're going through

I love it! please write more soon~

I know you didn't really like this chapter, but it wasn't that bad. I liked the NamineRiku and the SoraKairi. Even though it's not your forte. Keep up the good work!

I really actually liked this chapter, since you said it was going to be awful, I wasn't expecting much but it was really good, I can't imagine what the first version was like.

I'm really glad you jumped around to the side characters cause I was wondering what was going on with them lol.

Hm...good jobs with leaving clues for that particular plot line twist! I kinda guessed he was some type of richie.

You rock!

This chapter was great! I loved that Jasmine and Aladin were in the chapter and was glad that Roxas finally told everyone about him being a prince. Keep up the good work!

Another lovely story, I was really suprised that this one was updated so fast! lol, with the last chapter you let us know so I was expecting it but THIS was a surprise. :3~~ the only complaint that I have is that roxas is way too pasty to be from agrabah lol.

what is the favor?

i love it! i love naminexroxas, but ollette and roxas are cute here. i also love how she's a vampire, which is awesome! this is one of my favorite stories!