Wow, this is amazing. and you came up with this all by you self?

Impressive poem. I love it!

That's an intense piece of poetry. I'm not a poetry expert but I did enjoy reading it.

I especially like that last stanza with the line,

"My soul will go to heaven,

But my mind will go to hell. . . "

GREAT POEM! I've decided to read the rest of your work while I have the time! oh and just so you know James is still alive (if you've played starfox 64 in the alternate ending if you get to fight and defeat androsses true form and not the robot James leads fox out of the exploding lab and off of it before he dies so in short James is not dead... just in hiding) sorry I never mentioned that to you earlier I thought you knew!

OMFG! That is genius. That's a hit song right there.

There is an enormous amount of emotion pumped into this...rage, betrayal, question...another fantastic poem, Wolf Flash. Nothing to crit, it was all written very well.

-SOTR