Awesome :)

You need a sequel to this series

It is AMAZING

You had me wanting more that i tried to see if there was a chapter 16 and i was so gutted wen thea wasnt and i 4gt dat it woz da last one this was amzing make another one i truly love this you wat oout of ten i give you a hundred Bravo man

whoa i thought id never see thtis coming lillyy and joe !ahh how cute(:

OKokokokokokokokokokok. OK.

Well look, to be honest, it's better then most fanfiction on here. Some flaws are the slightly canned script, such as

“Don’t listen to Joe,” Kevin teased, ruffling Joe’s hair playfully. “He doesn’t know what he’s saying half the time.”

'Joe informed her haughtily'

It's standard perk. And annoying, but it's not overly prevelant so it's ok.

There's some unnecessary banter in there, like in the beginning. You use a few too many unnecessary adjectives, such as the script. That paragraph was too long, I'm sure you could have shortened it. Tune down the descriptions a little.

Otherwise, it's good so far.

PS, if you don't have a beta, get one. There are one or two grammar errors, but they aren't that big a deal.

Alrite i loved the story but i was really angry wen there was no ending

just a summary!

please write a summary

send me an email at

wen u finish it

xx Bronte

The story is AMAZING. I AM sad that it was just a sort of summary but it was really amazing. About Jonas, I like the show but joe/stella seems weird to me. Im still a die hard Loe/Jemily fan.

My has it been a long time since you psted anything. I've been waiting the entire time. It's nice to know what would have happened.

Anyways, I'm sad to hear that you've moved on from Hannah Montana, but I feel that you'll do wonders with JONAS.

Now, if memory serves me right, I do believe you were one of the few of the authors I read from that had yet to read Twilight. Now, for the festering question... Have you read the series yet? Did you see the movie? If you saw the movie and didn't read the book yet, I will just have to cry.

Hopefully you remember me, and my personality, otherwise this message comes off very creepy.

Anyways, okay back to the festering question. If you did see the first movie, are you planning to see the second? I saw Twilight and personally thought it was crap. New Moon however is proving to be doing quite well with the new director! I am very pleased with the footage that has been pre-released.

I await your next story. And as I have always said, I expect a signed copy of your first book, addressed to Andrea, of course...personalization is key!

Aww, I loved it! I've missed your fresh writing :) You did an amazing job finishing it all off. Perfect ending!

This was a great chapter! Please update this story! Its great!

ugh i love theese so much! all over your stories and one-shots. who is the stalker? its not that guy...i forgot his name... the one she bumped into and wanted to invite him to the lake when they all went. it coulgnt have been him because joe had asked for his help with "keeping lilly safe" once.

this story is really really good.

im glad mileys decided she likes nick and not joe!

hope you update soon :) x

Oh please update. I realy want to know who the stalker was, miley's reaction when she finds out that lilly and joe are dating, and miley and lilly's reacton when they find out that oliver and mikayla are friends and theyv'e been hanging out. You are an awesome writer. Please continue.

I hope you come back to this...it's a good story.

OMJ i love the chapter where Joe keeps interuppting the kiss! I dies laughing! So genius!

OMG U ARE AN AHMAZING WRITER! they chemistry Joe and Lilly have is just so realistic, as well as everyone else's characters. Way to go! Such a great story!