| Reviews for Undercover Slave |
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Yonomori chapter 23 . 3/16 I loved it! |
Yonomori chapter 23 . 3/16 It's almost touching. Jk. It's touching hahaha. The ending almost made me cry with happiness. Genma made me laugh when he suddenly covers the newly weds kissing. Hahaha, I so much love that part. Thank you for making this fanfic, it was an adventure to the mind. |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/23 Fuck! |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/3/2019 is this the cheap version of duty before honor or stripped bare? |
Aaerial15 chapter 12 . 8/2/2019 this chapter actually made me make popcorn. Awesome job |
Tokuariko chapter 1 . 7/3/2018 I kinda don’t like how you made Sakura. How she was throwing herself at Kakashi even though she knew what he did.I know that he was lying but she didn’t know the lemon scenes seemed a bit rushed and didn’t really take the time to write how they were feeling. Or at least different POV on different thoughts and in takes both of them were having. While being completely intimate for the first time. But overall I really liked the plot. It was great. And I liked how it wasn’t to long and wasn’t to short. I thought It was perfect in length wise. But great job! Really liked it. |
Guest chapter 8 . 11/28/2017 Very sensually arousing..good lemon..love it |
Guest chapter 23 . 11/23/2016 Love it |
Guest chapter 23 . 4/19/2016 So sad they k I llsa $use but he deserved5it. Lovely story. |
Riddledcloud chapter 1 . 3/23/2016 Loved this fic. I'm a kinky lover so this was kind of perfect |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2016 Based on the summary I think the intro chapter was well written. Keep up the good work! |
XxTaintedxDaggerxX chapter 23 . 11/27/2015 Cute fic! |
Renee chapter 23 . 1/14/2015 This is the second time I've read this story. Thank you for the amazing write. There was only one error that stood out to me, but it didn't bother the story much at all. In one of your sentences you used the word loose instead of lose to refer to a fear Sakura felt about possibly losing Kakashi. It's fairly common. Again, thank you for the story! You did an awesome job. |
hellokitty70705 chapter 1 . 10/14/2014 Awesome story so far, I really like the idea of Sakura posing as a slave... It's kinda funny. XD |
cherryflowerblossoms chapter 23 . 7/15/2014 Adorable. Loved it all! Faving you and your story! |