I'd love to see this story continue.

-DM

Sucks to be Dresden ne? Awesomeness

I'm having a great deal of trouble following the time-setting of this fic. You do things like referencing that Ramierez is a regional commander, but you also have him meet Harry for the first time. He was made a commander in the wake of deadbeat, wherein he met Harry.

hehehe... getting good. what will happen next i wonder? update soon!

love the story. wonder where harry is going to take them now?

Cool lot's of violence so far. But I need more dialog in future chaps. keep it up girl:)

Very nice. No action story is complete without a bad to the bone car chase. I'll take a shot in the dark. This story is about getting Thomas back in power?

Wonderful chapter

I kind of expected a bomb...

Don't know why, but it is a very good chapter as it is right now.

even better because it was such a fast update *grin*

XD

*grin*

LOved the four vampires-five places line, awesome.

Really a great chapter

XD

i love you story!

This chapter kicks so much ass it's hazardous to your health

Nice chapter

Spmetimes your repeat yourself, but it isn't too bad

I loved this scene:

'“And I’m not a kid.”

“Yes you are!” I chucked back.

“No I’m not. I’m twenty four!” Ramirez argued.

“That’s numerical for kid in the magical world.” I said side stepping a skeleton.

“What’s that make you then Hoss?” Ebenezar questioned me.

“A temperamental adolescent.” I replied.'

Awesome

XD

*grin*

Fantastic chapter! Love it

The Nevernever or a secret passage?

What happens next?

Great humor

XD

Kick ass fight scene. I would have liked more mingling but it's still cool.

bring on the vamps!