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how about a date/notadate/wereonlygoingasfriends thing? kinda cliche tho. *shrug*

i love this chapter the best! D

Though i don't read or watch naruto, this is really good. great work dude )

Aargh, so... fluffy. Which is great, by the way.

I love your story. It's funny.

PLEASE DONT STOP IT

yay! I was mentioned D thanks, aw but its such a cool and good story,hm when this happens to me I look at movies,novels,and dramas for inspirations you know what else I do I make a list of words and objects and make up an idea from that, if I come up with an idea I'll make sure to send it in 'kay anyway great chapter and job it was funny I was like aw so sweet D

You ought to touch on Hanabi's home life.

Hmm... I'm not very great at coming up with ideas for other people's stories unless they need improvement. Keep up the good work.

Write some chapters about the holidays.

Christmas and New Year especailly.

keep up the good work!

Ah, so I am entertainment then? Well, then I just might have an idea then! Kono could find Hanabi all bruised and bloody in the snow, and some dark truth about Hanabi is reveled!

aw! See, I got into this couple randomly last night (no joke) while I was listening to concrete angel by Martina Macbride. And then Konahamaru popped into my head, and so did Hanabi, and I was like aw, and people were staring at me like wtf, and now I'm trying to find stories about them. It's so cute!

This was ok and now I'm off to Church.

And some bad spelling with that.