| Reviews for Breaking Point |
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   Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 13 . 11/8/2016 You know, 'Kortus' also sounds like 'cortisol' or 'quarts'. 'Caught us' would be a first for DBZ, because it's a pun on two words. |
| Sailor Dragonball 87 chapter 5 . 11/8/2016 You spelled Chiaotzu's name wrong. It's "Chiaotzu", not "Chiaotuz". |
| x-Sheeqsee112-x chapter 13 . 1/15/2013 Okay, I think that's my pen name...I forgot to log in. ANYWAYS This was by far THE BEST Gohan-becomes-insane-and-evil story I have ever read. This story inspired another story of mine, one that I hope will be able to write after my exams. I love this story; you portrayed Gohan's multiple personalities well, and I could picture this as an actual anime (well, episode)! Thank you for this amazing piece of literature. The world needs more amazing writers like you! x-Sheeqsee112-x |
| insanityfare chapter 13 . 10/10/2010 Saw this on another site, glad to be able to read the whole thing. Creepy but good. |
| WoAiNi edward chapter 1 . 4/7/2009 Wow! That was intense! So cool and rather disturbing... but more cool! |
| supersaiyan chapter 13 . 11/25/2008 are you going to write anouther story a second part to this onw it would relly be would be intresting to know what happens next. |
| supersaiyaman chapter 10 . 11/25/2008 i hope the dragonballz can separate kartus from gohan so gohan dosnt go to hell too. |
| supersaiyaman chapter 6 . 11/25/2008 i kind thought that they would be able to be separated once they were dea.i hope they can find a way to kill kortus without killing gohan. |
| sujpersaiyaman chapter 5 . 11/25/2008 wow i hopw gohan gets control of himself soon outherwise he will not have any friends left. |
| supersaiyaman chapter 2 . 11/25/2008 so its his saiyan side coming he get totle control of he could he could fight better. |
| PositivelyInsane chapter 2 . 7/20/2008 Are Chi-chi and Goten dead? I just have to be sure cuz i've read a ton of stuff when they said "body" but they were still alive. Does Gohan go to highschool at all? I think it's great! i LOVE horror stories and movies! |
| Raco Cooper chapter 13 . 7/7/2008 I always thought the pun in Kortus' name was "court us" but that didn't make any sense. The sequel looks to be just as good as this story, I'm guessing that maybe the Saiyans and Kortus will somehow comeback to earth and wreak havoc, I dunno. |
| GingaGiri-Giri chapter 13 . 7/7/2008 Oh...I didn't read that last-last chapter. Haha. |
| GingaGiri-Giri chapter 12 . 7/7/2008 It's over! NO! Haha, can't wait till the sequal! Wait, didn't you say that you'd say what the pun off Kortus' same was? Haha. |
| GingaGiri-Giri chapter 11 . 7/6/2008 ...Stupid cliffhangers. Haha, good chapter, though! |
