Please make a sequel. This is too precious.

I just rewatched Sky high after like years and started searching for fanfic which there's depressingly not all that much of. I gotta say this is my favourite out of everything i've read for them :3 which is funny because they don't even kiss but it's just so aweosomely written and ahh i dunno it was just seriously amazing. Thank you for writing this :D

A su que pena pero el que tarda puede perder, y Will por tonto la predio, me alegra que su mama entendiera, gracias

Love it, so much. The redaction is concrete yet detailed, in an intimate way of thoughts. Really love the style of your work, hon! And the way you protrayed and construe the relationship between Layla and Warren; LIKE it way too much. Keep going with the hard work, darling! Hope read more of your new works ;) See ya!

I think it was obvious to everyone who watched the movie too - just not Disney apparently.

Wow!

but Layla and Warren should have always been together and Will's heart wont really be broken since he was basically hit on the head with the proverbial two by four before even noticing Layla - so I think it will be more his pride than his heart... well written and neat to see Josie's view.

Perspective thoughts confusing and disjointed at times, and exposition choppy, but adorbs. Fantastic idea, execution could be better. Keep writing! :)

Very good

I love it! It's absolutely wonderful. The Warren/Layla and Will/Layla interactions and their differences are beautifully described through Josie's perspective.

Love it! :)

I, for one, don't give a damn about Will. So I'm all for them breaking him.

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KT

Woah, awesome, loved it! I really want to see what you can do for WHEN they break his heart. Because I never liked Stronghold.

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KT

wow! that was really really good! i always loved Warren and layla together they have more chemistry than layla and will ever will. i really loved that inside joke of theirs and the way they interact this really looks like it could have happened after the movie. too bad it didn't though but thats why we have fanfiction. anyways really good story. loved it :)

I love this, how it's from a mother's perspective and how they're doing all these things and Will's determined to ignore it all. I especially like the fortune cookie thing at the very end.

One thing that I didn't like was how you didn't state earlier on in the story that is was from Josie's perspective. While it became apparent in the middle of it, at the beginning it was a bit confusing.