Good story

Since i am a person, i shall review(i have no, idea why i said that.)

Well the entire time i'm just saying in my head, "see-moore and jinxxyyyy"

XD

I liked your story a lot! :D I hope you write more!

Happy Writing!

~RidingtheRoughWaters

Nice job of setting up Jinx and KF for their subsequent meeting in Lightspeed. Good luck in whatever you're doing in the interim between stories. And keep growing in your storytelling ability.

Good job of working the plot so that Jinx cleverly gets what she wants. It's decently written; you've definitely improved from your earlier efforts.

I liked the interaction of incognito KF with incognito Jinx. I'm not sure why KF is supposed to have lost his powers and not whipped that loser Fang with ease.

I sort of feel like some of this should be slightly condensed somehow but I'm not sure exactly where. And, of course, I hate to see KF being easily tricked. Oh well.

Jinx is the best! :D

A lot of twists and turns in that chapter. I guess the only thing that really jumped out as implausible was KF and BB finding out that Jinx was competing with Kitten and in communication with her but thinking they could keep pretending to be Kitten on the phone. That was probably a one time deal at best.

Fun chapter.

Nah, I don't think it's that odd that she would flirt with another guy as long as it didn't go too far. I don't see Jinx as the pining away waiting for the knight in shining armor type. She's a high powered villain, for god's sake. Or was. She's too much of a self-starter for that. Also, like a lot of people, she's having fun at it and it's serving as a sort of testing grounds for dealign with a guy she might really care about -cough-KF-cough-

Anyway, pretty good chapter.

Sophie Board seems innocent, fun, and just a regular girl. Sophie Board is the exactly opposite of jinx. I think that that was an amesome chapter

BB & KF interaction is always fun to read. You just know that those two together would have a good time.

Gizmo have a crush on Jinx? Well...she is awesome. But isn't Gizmo like 8 or something? Or is he just tiny?

Of course Gizmo has a sort of crush on Jinx. But talk about unlikely to be able to express it or act on it! The chapter was okay but you've got some errors at the start and when Starfire speaks and says "BB and Kid Flash" the way the others would it seems odd.

Like the last couple chapters, there's nothing wrong with it but there seems to be an issue of pacing. There's too much small stuff here that doesn't quite move the story forward.