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Just wanted you to know that I love this FF and I hope you go back to regular updates. My only (only) complaint is that their relationship seems to have regressed (they've kissed already, why is it that they never do anymore?) in terms of how close they are, but still, great work!

btw i am UzimakiRasenKaze. just made this acc coz i couldn't remeber login info...

nice prolouge. BUT,

it's scum, not trash when i watched it.

woot! you said Hatake Kakashi(Japanese and CORRECT), NOT Kakashi Hatake (American and WRONG)

all in all... I like you already.

(btw soz about not being logged in - forgot my pass...

Awesome!

Keep it up!

well i only just started this yesterday and i'm sad that we're already at the end of your updates. why this doesn't have more reviews i don't know. the story is good, the characters well developed past their original concepts, and the writing superb. you got yourself a new fan in me.

Zamrok

I love the kiss part.

Wonderful Update!

Great chapter!

XD

It's a really great story. And your style of writing is also beautiful. Much kudos. :)

Have you noticed that the spray is always in a perfect cone? No matter how many times I try that it is never a perfect cone shape spray. That's cartoon physics for you.

What is it about NaruHina that makes the Laissez-Faire approach not an option for observers. I have never seen another couple that gets meddled with as often.

Oh so it is after the time skip. At first I thought it was set in the filler time period. If they hadn't been on a boat Naruto would have owned that guy with pure numbers. His technique uses a lot of chakra, so if he had to read 300 minds he would drain himself very fast.

Cool Update!