Beautiful. I love how you made the character Owen generous. :)

This is just so perfect .o.

Wonderful story, I love the interaction between Ed and Lucy as seen through an alternate POV.

Both gorgeous and adorable! Very well written, great characterization for a piece so short, and I loved seeing those two (who are my favourites out of the four) from an outside view. Great job!

Very wonderful!

Stellar!

Very nice story :) It was very sweet and well written

Brilliantly done: it was characterised perfectly, and I enjoyed reading about the effect the Pevensies' experiences in Narnia have on the people around them. Overall, an awesome story that made me smile :D

I love this. Especially how Lucy is able to see Aslan even in her world. It's a lovely story, and I like that Owen gave them the painting for free at the end.

Brilliantly done; I enjoyed reading it.

:D

That was incredibly beautiful.

The description of the painting and the adults Edmund and Lucy were despite their looks, as well as the extent to which they trusted and loved each other and Aslan...SO beautiful!

Rock on, and I liked the character of Owen immensely! U *U*

Ever-so sincerely signed,

Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

Glimpses of Aslan even in England.

Thank you.

Good job.

Lovely! It brings such a charming picture to my head that I can't help but smile. I love how it's from Owen's view and you're description of the pain lying beneath the childish faces was truly wonderful.

loved it!

luna